You know what they say: A bicycle can't stand on its own because it's two-tired!

Lol, I loved how it ended. And I like the dedication, very nice. Good job!!

~Fantasy

waiting expectantly, babe!

Wisecracker88

Yeah, It is goign to be tought,even for me.

Ha Ha.

Wisecracker88

I agree with Jack. One messed up Fan fic, but I love messed up fan fics.

Wisecracker88

lol your second chapters cute. I especialy love the one devil from hell at the table and Pie Eater eatin his pie.

Leh Sundance

That was funny. This was such a good idea for a fic!! lol. Can't wait until the next chapter!!

~Fantasy

"DIs is goin' ta be one messed up fan fic Davey."
GREAT LINE!! haha... Anyway, I thought this was good, and I can't wait for another chapter. Seems like a promising fic!!
~Fantasy

Hey I really like this story. I just love the delancys, especially oscar if he'd wash his hair and get a long with people. Please up date really soon.
Leh Sundance

“Dis is goin’ ta be one messed up fan fic Davey.