I love it, I love it, I love it! The style you've done this in is wonderful!

scribbles please do not stop.do not make this a one shot for i see so much plot in this story it screams to me begging to be kept up page after page to be filled with her hopes and dreams to conqor new worlds dont STOP!

wow! really great! i love it! itscool how she thinks she is going crazy. you should write more!

woah awesome!
Very different from what I expected. Great!

Oh my gosh. I don't understand why you don't have fifty-some reviews for this fiction. It was so poetic! I love it. Chihiro...poor girl. But amazingly written. I love how the paragraphs are short. I was pleased at your use of sentence fragments. The story seems broken (in a poetic way), but that's only because Chihiro's thoughts are broken. Good job.

"I know I'm going crazy. I know that it never happened."

Excellent line to start out with. And the way you resolved your story was very pleasing. ^_^ She turns her back from disbelief in the first line to waiting for Haku in the last line. And the "giggling" hair tie? Excellent addition. By the way, I love your summary. Very enticing. It's what made me read this story. Superb writing! Cheers to you!

-C. Callispi

Very nice! Sad, and just the way I like it! Thankz!

This was interesting to say the least, a nice one-shot from Chihiro's POV. I would have wished for more description, but that's just me and my preferences. Besides, I liked the idea that while she was on the hospital bed, she saw Haku and made the choice to wait. (at least, that's what I gather)
Very lovely fic.
~Dragon Faere.