Ha ha spoilsports. Man your so good at Freya amarant. I love you stories. I'd wish you'd make more.
Anyway great story!

nicely done.

This story is a good study of Freya and Amarant. I like the way you write them both as rather crochety and not wanting to join in with the others.

Freya's distinction between rain and swimming is interesting and likely realistic. It's funny how people can draw such fine distinctions between their likes and dislikes, but I tihnk it's true to life.

The interactions between the characters are well done. Amarant kids Freya for being too uptight and eventually she unwinds a little.

Not a great deal happens in this story, but it's still interesting because your dialogue is rather well written. The story has the feeling of the lazy sort of sunny day which it depicts.

Ah, a great, cute little vignette. Well characterised AND well-written. I just love these little character-driven pieces ^^ Time for me to check out more of your work, methinks!

xxLCxx

I happen to like one-trick ponies. Especially ones that can write.
Enough said.
(I figured that maybe I should inform you about your permanent status on my favorites list. You were the first one up there and you have undying immunity for all eternity. Bascially, you could write a bunch of crap and I would still worship the ground you walk on. So go type your fingers off, hun.)

ha, another amarant-freya fic of yours. Your writing is very well I don´t have the feeling, as if both of them were OOC or something. And though there´s not much happening in the story I had a lot of fun reading it.
I just hope, that you will also continue Persistence of memory one day (please don´t feel bothered or something ^^)

Wow, that was just plain awesome. I love your way of writing. Good description, dialogue, etc. etc. Great work ;)

Aww, this was short but undeniably sweet. I love the way you manage to maintain Freya and Amarant's character in your stories; though it makes me wrinkle my nose at my own sad attempt at fanfiction.
Your writing skills are impressive, as always. On a side note, I hope that you continue to write Persistence of Memory, I've been monitoring it lately in hopes of a new chapter. If that isn't going to happen anytime soon, another story such as this one would not go unappreciated. ;)
-- Ourania

vedy nice.

I liked that. The character interaction was great.

Now what happened to your other story that I reviewed? Will you update that? It was interesting. Also, will you PLEASE read my fanfic?
As was this, a rather amusing scene in wherever they are. Plus we have the rather comic prospect of Steiner falling into a river, with a possibility of Zidane laughing his monkey butt off at him, enraging Steiner thusly.
Rather amusing, I hope you do more soon.

Am I right in suspecting that you like the Freya - Amarant coupling?
If so, then you and I have something in common.
One thing that we are completely different in is that... I am not a master at that particular little sub-genre.
You are.
Keep writing.
--Yandrilese-Starfire--

All I can say is adorable. I'm an utter sucker for vignettes that show a character's facets so neatly and delicately. There was nothing overwhelming to it but you could see the interest and curiosity brewing. I dare say - The Moment They Became "Proper" Teammates.

Okay, is it just me, or does some deity love me? It appears to be Freya/Amarant Funday at FF.net right now, and one of them is by *you*. Happy days. You do remain, Ms. Frost, my favourite F/A author. Hell, I think you even did the first one ever, damn your eyes. This story made me crack up laughing - I started giggling openly at "You just went up about five points" and didn't stop until the end. Oh, mercy. You illustrate these two so beautifully with minimum of useless brushstrokes - the uneasy and tenative harmony between the two by the end is something extraordinarily beautiful to behold. If you are a one-trick pony, you are bestest one-trick pony around.