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Meru-chan 2006-07-12 . chapter 17
I love your story and all, especially the detail and the creepy prophecy thing. So I was wondering, could u e-mail the whole prophecy thing to Well bye!! Loved it!
Steel Butterfly 2006-07-07 . chapter 17
OHMIGOD!

I don't even know where to begin! This has been one of the most original Gravis I've read in quite awhile. The pairings and the drama and frustration: I JUST CAN'T TAKE IT!

I LOVE IT!

I wasn't too big on Fuji at first. But he's started to grow on me. Mainly the ones where he's a little older, but still. And to put him with K was a cute idea. The only thing that got me was he just got outta his coma and K is like all on him. Was it something that developed before the coma or just a He's-awake-now-so-no-wasting-time kinda thing?

Although I still hate the whole Hiro-with-Ayaka thing, I wouldn't care if he were with another woman, just not HER(lol)! But you've already taken care of that, so YAY!! Hey, why not put him with Ryuichi? That's a nice but not usually done pairing. Y'know, Ryu is able to show his mature side more often since he's with sweet, sensible, adorable, sexy, down-played-WAY-too-often-to-Shuichi, grieving and vulnerable HIRO! I would give you so many cookies (and ice cream if you want) if that just happen to work it's way in the story.

Well, I'm waiting for the next chappie so no fun time until it's done.

SB

Okay, a little fun, then back to work! *cracks whip with devious smile*
Anon 2005-11-01 . chapter 16
It's been awhile. Are you going to update this? *prods*
After all, you're almost done with the story. One more push, c'mon. *prods* There just hasn't been much decent Gravi to read, and you've got one of the better stories going.
DaisukeAizawa 2005-07-14 . chapter 16
I thank your friend Terry also that line is pricles I have actually just come across this fic today and read all of the chapters so far...I am very sad about Aizawa but I see how he had to die...so I dont hate you too much...actually I loveyou for using one of my favorite couples K and Suguru the only difference with your coupling and mine there is that Suguru is his actually anime age of 16. call me sick? I thank you for that. BUt really I love this fic. Keep going with this.
Yami Sakuma 2005-02-23 . chapter 15
Wow... that's pretty... deep. NO, TACHI! It's so sad! (cries)
Terry 2005-01-28 . chapter 15
^_^ You continue to twist my brain clockwise and around the corner.

Yay.
Supreme Monkey (THE SECOND COMING!! YAY!!) 2005-01-07 . chapter 14
WAHHAHAHAAH! ;_; THE UTTER HORROR!! I have missed TOO MUCH!! BUT I LIVE!

Chapter 8: WOW! Smexy! And kinky affair, too!! Poor Judy! They seemed so in love, too!! And K’s son! That’d be traumatizing to a little kid. “Sorry, son, but daddy left mommy for a boy 20 years his junior.” Hee hee hee! O_O You gotta make a chapter like that. And then Judy can go into a jealous rampage and beat Kitazawa’s head open with a pineapple!! And thus, the evil was vanquished...

Chapter 9: Aww, poor Mika-san! At least Tohma can now get pity-sex from Yuki with no qualms. It’d be kinky, too, with deer antlers and trout, and a CABBAGE!!

Chapter 10: Poor Suguru!! No more kinky love fest for him!! I bet it’ll be...Tachi who’s sacrificed!! HA HA HAA!! Mainly because he seems to have fallen into a plot hole or something... They just need candles, and kinky handcuffs, and a spoon, and VOILA!! INSTA-SACRIFICE!! How strange that Kitazawa has gone Pagan all of a sudden. I bet it’s Candid Camera.

Chapter 11: I’m so confused!! WAHH!! Maybe Kitazawa still has a thing for young boys. >_>;;

Chapter 12: OH MY GOD!! MY RANDOM NAMEPICKING FOR SACRIFICE WAS TRUE! ;_; I’m scarred for life now.
PorcylenCrazyspirit 2004-12-24 . chapter 14
Hi!This is me Crazyspirit102!I just changed my name, what do you think?I'm sorry that person flammed you!WHat a jerk! I didn't see any wholes, and if I did they were't bad enough to flame about!Keep up the good work! ANd happy holidays to you!I want you to know that I've been looking forward to this storys updates!Till nez time!
Shirubaa Kitsune 2004-11-16 . chapter 13
This is really Crazyspirit102 ^_^
Oh, why do you do this I need more than one chapter! Give me more!I want to know it all, what happens. By the way I hope it's alright I used a quote from your story when K and S were doin the nasty the "He feels like home". Plz read me and Shirubaa's story, it's under Inuyusha called Under World. Let me know what you think!
Yami Sakuma 2004-11-07 . chapter 12
...Hm... Interesting. Oh, by the way, you wrote the prophecy wrong in this chapter. You wrote 'Now Green yields Rust' instead of 'Blond'. And it was confusing. Thank god there's the prophecy there to check.

...Hm... I still wonder who will die next. Someone close to K and Hiro, I suppose? I still think Shuichi. That would be so sad!
PorcylenCrazyspirit 2004-11-04 . chapter 12
HELO!
I LOVE, your story! I"m reading it instead of doing my project!naughty me! I like it alot! PLEASE UPDATE! don't leave me hanging! I got hit by the hurricans too I live in orlando! PLEASE UPDATE! don't make me wallowing my own self wonderment!
Yami Sakuma 2004-09-10 . chapter 12
Oh my god! I mean, Ayaka, okay. She's a ** anyway and I was so happy she had died!! BUT MIKA! NOT MIKARIN! SHE'S COOL!

*gasp* Two girls...NO! DON'T KILL PICO PICO NORI-CHAN! SHE'S THE COOLEST!

But I guess it'll be someone... more important than that...? *gasp* Maybe Shuu-chan! He has gotten a small role in this after all...

DUM DUM DUM.

Hope I haven't guessed everything, that would suck, wouldn't it? :) Luv ya and yer story, darlin'! Keep on trottin' on this story.
Kloudy Reignfall 2004-09-06 . chapter 12
Ooh, I love this story! Too bad I just started to read it. Anyway, it's a really weird idea, very different and all that, I really like it. :D (Lol, and the rape scene, very good! I read it to my friend and she liked it too! lol it's like a double review! :P)
I've never read a SuguruxK before. Yay! I'll add that to my list of strange pairings! Thank you! So, sorry for the hurricane and all that, I hope you aren't getting hit by Frances too. (It just knocked out our power, damn storm.)
Anyway, please update as soon as you can! I'll be waiting!
(In the meantime, geez I wish I could get myself to write! It's been forever since I updated some of my stuff...)
Lisa E Forever 2004-09-04 . chapter 12
another good chapter!! Poor Mika-chan!! *cries* I DON'T LIKE THAT DOCTOR!! This is a great story! Update soon!!
Yami Sakuma 2004-08-21 . chapter 11
Wow. This fic is WAY cool. And... way original. I REALLY like it! The thing is, I cannot review for future chapters to come this summer because of a computer problem, but I WILL follow this story! And review when I can whence I return in September. So don't abandon me and keep writing!

Seriously!
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