Hi just read your story it was very good.

Very good story. I liked it a lot.
Thanks for writing it.

Retribution? For her bign shot? or somethign else? can't wait to read more

Nice story! I enjoyed it!

Hi imag1ne,

When I started to read this story I was hooked. You are an amazing writer and your characterization of the characters is perfect. This was a very intense and powerful story. I'm glad that you're planning to write a sequel.
Mercy

PLEASE IS GREAT... YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE SEQUEL... PLEASE... PLEASE

I started to read this and realised that I had already read it. I love your Lyle in this and what goes on with the boy.Poor Jarod. This was a great story.
Jacci

I think this was the first story of yours
that I ever read, and I have been hooked ever since. I worry about putting this on the PG page, because if I were a kid and read the first chapter I would have to follow the link to see what happened next. The rest is too much for kids, but I know that wouldn't have stopped me back then and I would have been disturbed by the rest. That said, you are a fantastic writer, I am so excited to see that you are going to do a sequel. I can't wait!

i read this story when it first came out... please write a sequal... i raelly wanted one years ago! awesome work