hey this was great.

this was an awesome story i liked it a lot

That was really ubrupt, I mean, the story could have merited a 'fantasic' if you had slowed down, written a heck of a lot more details, and separated thoughts and actual talking more clearly. Put more work into your writing!

Aw! that was cute. it ended eh? i think you should take it farther.

Hey, this is so cute! Do write more, it's sweet. : ) Ron and Hermione all the way!

Sweet!!

weird end though...

love,

TJP

Hi Silverkid,
I think your story's sweet, but there are a lot of gramatical mistakes that I think you might have to take care of, and some analyzation is definitely needed for your story since everything just seems very shattered and scattered.

Anyway, keep on!

-missmetallic

still soo cute...could you make the chapters a little longer please?

oh so cute so cute! keep writing!

i like this story i hope you continue. its kinda annoying that the chapters are so short but thats ok

Ever: ew!
Shadows: 4get it, Ever, it waz gr8!
Ever: good but plz no contact!
Ever In The Shadows: gr8 work! more description will make it better than better!

aw that was soo cute!! i loved it! my fav part was that whole 'ron what are we?' 'i dont know but your mine' thing! ahh so cute!
all my love
lissa

that was so sweet!
love,
TJP