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Half-Blood Metamorphmagus
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
Hey!

Amazing One Shot! I loved the way this was written, it was different, but terribly awesome! And the atmosphere is immense! =D

Keep up the good work and don't stop writing! =D
smaginn
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
WOW. Poetic, beautiful, brilliantly LUNA. WOW. You are.. simply amazing. This story is... any compliments I dish out wouldn't do any justice to this story. x Smaginn
Thyrin
2007-08-05 . chapter 1
This was beautiful, so poetic. You did justice to Luna.
anonymous
2006-06-17 . chapter 1
Wow, this is so powerful, and so incredibly well written... almost poetic in places, in fact. I'm glad I stumbled across your author's page; I'm just blown away by the quality of some of these fics.
myself
2006-02-05 . chapter 1
Wow. Very...distorted, and beautiful. Unique and interesting, I think it's the parts in parenthesis that makes it work so well. Brilliant fic.
Stephanie
2005-12-21 . chapter 1
I cried, and I loved it, and you are such a great writer. . . that is all
winky-wink
2005-12-06 . chapter 1
now THAT is good. i really liked it. i can imagine harry and luna going back to the veil. they were really so fascinated by it.
Firefly's Locket
2005-10-25 . chapter 1
Lovely Despair. You'd understand how great of a compliment that was if you knew me. I only say that about the most heartwretching of things. The beauty of pain captured in the most wonderful way.
lunafan
2005-08-31 . chapter 1
woah..omg, this was bittersweet.. but so well written!
Steph ;)
Sarah
2005-07-22 . chapter 1
Wow! Chills that's what this fic had me feel. Very good, excelent in fact.
VenusRising
2005-07-21 . chapter 1
wow, this fic is so moving. i was a little confused at the end, did harry actually remain on the other side of the viel
newtypeshadow
2005-02-28 . chapter 1
i love this. so much. it's so vivid, and the style is woven with the best aspects of poetry. your way with language is stunning! *fav*
Mari Grem
2005-02-24 . chapter 1
That was...that was beautiful. But I can't see Harry leaving Luna, I just won't believe it.
-Cole
Sweetest Thang
2005-01-29 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I'm confused, but it was bloody beautiful. Did Luna leave him--or did she go in?
Verg
2004-12-24 . chapter 1
When I think of H/L I usually think of humor and fluff, but the way you present them here, as these two broken souls, I love it. I'm in awe by it. "If you had beckoned plead bribed would he have stayed? ... [by the way he told you, gasping, this isn’t anything like love]" Those parts struck me to the core. The emotion in those lines, the whole story, is so pure and breathtaking, bitter beautiful, it kills me and right now I just don't know what to do with myself. Just- Thank You.
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