this is beautiful. the last line is especially effective, with the moonlight that shines through the poem suddenly alone in the dark.

I'm too choked up to say anything except, that was one of the most sublimely beautiful things I have ever read in my life. The first line in particular was just perfect.

Thank you.

wow... that was cool... i mean that was really andsty but it was really good... you just wrote that? blimey i could never do that it was very moving as well, so all i can say is good on yer ^.^ bi bi
russle

While I was reading this I was picturing two moon beam thingies wrapping around eachother continuously, like that was what the words were doing. This is so beautiful, you write wonderfully.
~A. Person