XD kywa! <- my "kawai!"
i like 2 b different ^^

*Raenef: 0/0
Eclipse: 0/0
Artemis: 0/0 aw is there no more!? MORE MORE MORE! XD KYWA!

Aw, how fluffy!

That was HOT! And the Erutis and Chris part was hilarious! You should add more to it!

I LOVED IT! Thats awesome at the end! They were totally oblivious to Erutis and Chris! It was so funny!! Keep writing please. This was a great one-shot!

woohoo! go eclipse and raenef!

It was cute and funny. Please continue it, it could become a great fic.

HAH this made me laugh and laugh and laugh and well you get the point but THANK YOU!

Thankyou! I was looking for a fanfic just like this. ^_^ I'm so happy!

Okay, I have some criticism about this story. First of all, it seems very similar to another story that I've read about Rae & Eclipse sitting near a bonfire playing truth or dare. I don't know who published theirs first, but this could be a little more original. Sorry if I made you mad...Eh..Bye.

Loved the fanfic, please update soon so I can read the rest if your going to add anymore to the fanfic that is. ^_^

man u had to put those two in. its so romatic! cuts chris and erutis out of picture! much better! continue

awesome story

nice, you actually managed to keep the characters how they would normally act! not many people can do that! you deserve chocolates and other yummy stuffs! yay! ^^ ME GO MAKE COOKIES!

Why are they whaching?!

That was the shortest sweetest fic I've ever read!! Heeheehee...I KNEW ERUTIS WAS A PERVERT!! Like me!! ::shifty eyes:: I dunno..I'd rather watch Eclipse and Rae make out than play a goofy game of Truth-or-Dare...unless I could make the lovelies still do pervy things!! ^.^
I think what I'm trying to say is: Fab-O job, mate!