I started this story kinda of late so I haven't had the chance to review. Just wanted to let you know how much I've enjoyed it! Loved the kids and the way you characterized Kaiba and Joey! Looking forward to more.

They were gonna do it during Seto's birthday, right? (Has anybody else remembered this? Hehehehehe!) *hopeful* *wink wink*

I really love the story and have been reading it over and over again! I still find it so sweet and really addicting! ^^ keep up the good work!

I apologize for the duplicate review, but I just noticed your poll on your profile about a Family of Dragons 2, and I have to say it: YES YES YES.

I would love you forever if there was a sequel to this. You are two extremely talented writers, and I loved every bit that you wrote. Honest to god. And I just love this story that you've developed between all the different characters...oh, it's so good. I'd love to hear more about the children, about the other characters as well, and how Jounouchi and Kaiba start over. There's just so many things to come! <3

Oh my god.

Oh my god.

I can't believe this is it! I flipped out when I got the e-mail notification that you uploaded the final two chapters -- I'm still in shock. Six years. Six years, and it's finally ended. You two are wonderful. So, so wonderful. I'm bawling over here, I'm so happy. The ending was just perfect. I'm overjoyed that they were able to overcome their difficulties and just...try again. From the start. From where they began.

I wanted to hit Bakura and Malik at first, unfortunately, but I was really proud of Honda for making Jou able to see. And the fact that he, Jounouchi, was able to understand himself and surrender, give himself entirely to Kaiba...ohh. I loved it.

And the final scene, with the two dragons intertwined. Beautiful.

I can't wait until the epilogues. Thank you so much for this. <3

wow, its really been 6 years! this is the longest i've stayed with any fic to read it to completion. but this chaperts defintely a nine out of ten, only b/c the cliffy. great job guys...ok halfway through this 24 got posted and i loved it, a really good really great chapter, the ending was fantastic and the little dragons together where really cute i can't wait for the ending chapter so far its been great. fantastic.

Wow you had me hanging till the last moment that it would end between them , and then you had them try again. I really loved this story and it will be sad to read the epilogue because then it will be really over.

Really great chapter and story.

thanx for updating and for making it as long...er...est...as possible...tahnx for working ** this story, too!

Thank you SOO much for this update, I've had a rough week with swine flu and all, and you really don't know how much this brightened my day!

I loved this chapter VERY much. No flaws with it whatsoever. I am really looking forward to the next chapter because of the "Katsuya." cliffhanger (Loved that, by the way :D).

Please have a fast update? You'll be my best friend if you do! *Tempts feebly*

Haha, have a good night/morning/afternoon/day!

<3 Aud

I started reading this in high school, and while the wait has been unbearable at times, it's always been worth it. Katsuya and Seto better make this right. Good chapter.

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aw this is so good I really hope they get back together update it soon

AH! [[Starts to bash head against the keyboard]]A whole week straight of reading this and we get to this turning point!?

It's been since May and no update? This story is damn good, the best I've seen yet for my new twisted kick of a pairing. You must complete this. I love the children and I absolutely love how you have made this story actually believable in the sense of Kaiba and Jou not just getting to the dirty but oh man, I know that if they stay together that it will be very rewarding. The children completely enchant me with their selfish wishes, I mean they ARE children, but also their wit. I have to say if anything I really want to see the children's wish of their fathers getting together to happen.

Can I reitenerate how much I love the fact that Kaiba and Jou don't automatically hit the sack? It's such a tease but also brings that quality that most author's try to convey but can't really point it out or bring it out as you have. The concept of true love [[Or maybe I'm looking too far into this but I have to say it looks like you're trying to focus on that]]

Next to the long blurb of letters and words I just have to say that this is a very very very VERY well written story and I would like to see how it ends. So please dont' stop from writing this ESPECIALLY since you have said that you're close to the end. I just hope that even if Kaiba and Jou don't stay together that you continue to use your great writing to conclude this and maybe write more of this pairing. Because finding a story like yours is a rarity in itself.

Wow. Just wow. I first followed this story when it came out five years ago. I loved it to pieces. Then, during a lull in the story, I fell out of the fandom for a while. Now that I'm back into it full swing, I've realized just how much I've missed your story. I just finished sitting down and rereading the entire thing all over again. You two make an amazing team, I've loved every chapter. It's been a long road, and I'm both sad and happy to see the ending. Thanks so much, this has sucked me in like no other story has ever done.

And now I really can't wait to see the conclusion. My heart ached for both Kaiba and Jounouchi when I read the last few words. I just hope that everything works out for them. Looking forward to the finale! <3

This is truly the most amazing SetoJou fanfiction I have ever had the pleasure of reading. It's very different and original from all the other stories I've ever read. This story is really well written and the plot is amazing.


I love how all the characters act. At first I thought I wouldn't like the concept of Seto and Jou having kids, and how the kids will play a role into the story. But I was pleasantly surprised how well they fit into the story. They're so adorable!


I absolutely adore this fic! I really hope for a quick update. I mean the story is so close to the end! I am so anxious to see how it will all end. I really look forward to the next chapter. =)

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JKJK~ Well, I certainly have nothing to say. As in, no concrit, what needs improvement etc. This plot is really well thought out and certainly well written! I love how all the characters act. At first, I didn't think I would sit well with the idea of both Kaiba and Jounouchi having kids, and how it would affect their relationship, but after spending a good couple of days just sitting and reading, I realized, this story works so well with them!

So, I sit here, telling you guys, I am highly anticipating the next chapter. Their troubles are just reminding me of my life experiences, and oh god, tears fall from my eyes, and I just have to know how it ends.

Speedy updates for the hooked reader? 8D