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| nom-de-plume13 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseAnother very good story, and I can hear the character's voices as they speak. |
| Yolanda 2004-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseFantastic work Beth!! Keep it up and I look forward to your other works in progress!! Take Care and God Bless, Yolanda |
| TSAW 2004-06-09 ch 1, | abuseHave to say this is one of the better Adam 12 fics out there. And that puts your story in some great company cuz I think that the few who write for Pete and Jim seem to be particularly good. I truly enjoyed Pete's discomfiture over being a hero (which we know he is) and I love the banter between Pete and Jim re: Judy. Jean is sweet without being too sweet and Judy seems like the type of person Pete would like. The scenes with Jimmy were very well done also. Would love to read more Adam 12 by you. Tam |
| KatKnits00 2004-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove your fics, looking forward to reading more. |
| marty 2004-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseIts a great story. I hope there will be a 2rd part to it. |