Really awesome job on this, particularly in re; to Sgt. Farell. I'd be interested in seeing more POV's especially that of Maj.West.

I like this, quite a bit. It was very dramatic, and powerful. I think it gave the characters you described a much needed addition of personality. Especially Mark, and Farrell. They were sorely under developed in the movie.

They only constructive criticism I have is that in the third chapter, you say 'Izzy Pop'. I think you meant "Iggy Pop".

Other than that, it was flawless. Well done.

Wow. That was great. I remember being on the verge of tears when Frank died in the movie, lol, and the way you wrote chapter two just brought out a tidal wave of emotions. Wow, that sounds lame, lol. Good job though! :P

wow

Ow! You made it even more sad then the movie! ROCKON!

WOW that was good!

This is amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really felt like you captured Farrell well.

this is too good 2 leat die dude! dont let it die aor i will find u and @#$#$#@@!

Very nicely-done fanfic. My only problem was the repetative "It wasn't fair" in Frank's chapter. Might his dying thoughts have been a little deeper?

this is quite good so you better write more i,ll infect the whole world mwahhahahaaha

mark is my favorite character )

Okay now! I need another chapter. This was great. So Frank. Mark's was pretty good too, but Frank's was eerie. Very good.

You could at least edit out the swearing.

Verry good. im really impressed with the point of veiw u took. the only thing is there weren't too many ppl who died in the movie so its kinda limited the amout of thoughts u could put in, but all in all it was really good

I was very interested in reading these fics. I definitely prefer the second one. The insight into Frank is very good, and his transformation is really well done. I did like how Mark had that last hope that Selena was just chopping off his arm. That seemed very in character. The shift of point of view at the end of the first chapter is a little jarring. It works much better in ch 2. “the soldiers that he had been waiting for so long to meet finished him off