Hey i LOVED it so update already it has been ages u didnt give up did u coz i realy want to see what happens i like that Angelus is a bad ** its kewl and Buffy should be somewhat a good girl not into drugs or getting drunk but she should be wild like loves to party, dance and should not be a virgin she can be a small player in a way that would be kewl

Great so far! I love how you used the actors' names for 'Sara the Vampire Slayer'.

love this story.

PLEASE CONTINUE!!

i like it keep writing please

A good beginining, I like it so far. But Angel to seems a bit two faced, so I'm not sure what to make of him yet. Spike seems to be the more up front and honest one even if he seems to be a bad boy.

Interesting story idea. The first part was good..the only thing that I would change is for you to re read your work and use spell check before you send it out..because some of the sentences were difficult to read. Other then that, update soon!