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| Lament of Meow 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI love it. It IS a question, how his hat manages to stay the same through all the abuse. I like the bickering between the crew over it. =) |
| De-Ji 2007-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseinteresting... I never thought about that, but it's true! that's awesome! |
| Kage NoTenshi 2004-06-04 ch 1, | abuseI never really thought about that, but it's a tad creepy. I like the theorizing, though. It's well done, and I love how it gets wilder and wilder until everyone gets nervous and has nothing more to say. ^__^ Good job! |
| Shylu 2004-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe funny KILLS me! (in a good way) It's short, but right on target. Although you never describe who's talking, from what they said I can roughly guess who's saying what. However, I suggest giving more action description in between the dialogues, because reading all dialogues can be tiring. The ending is perfect. Now I can never look at the hat the same way again :D |
| Sweet Anime Fan 2004-05-25 ch 1, | abuseAh cute! Those are my thoughts exactly. ^o^ |
| marianne77 2004-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good story! That all I got to say about it... |
| Bloody Mary 2004-05-24 ch 1, | abuseLol! The poor hat - it puts so much effort in staying in tact and they don't appriciate it! |
| PurpleInkBlot 2004-05-23 ch 1, | abuseIt's made of straw...hence "Straw-Hat Luffy"... |
| Melissa 2004-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseFunny little story! Good point about how the hat should be made of patches instead of straw by now. |