Good story.

This was a really nice fanfic. My only problem with it is it feels very rushed. You should have taken the time to describe more of the events and feelings of the characters, it wouldn't have taken much but it would have done a world of good.

Besides that though you did a very nice job story wise; I loved the last part!

Nice story. Loved the ending.

Yup! That's what he gets for not listening to the Doc. Great chapter! Glad everything worked out okay! Great job.

Aw.

So, I just submitted a review for The First cut is the deepest . . .and what the heck is with you and not finishing stories? Not . . . that . . . I'm . . . complaining . . . *attempts to hold in anger while glaring at Michelle* PLEASE keep going.

You HAVE to continue this. It's such a great story. You cannot stop this story here.

OH MY GOD! you can not leave us in suspense like that...please continue asap! poor Daniel! very well written too!

Oh my goodness! What a beginning! Please update soon. Very well written. I'm in huge suspence, so I can hardly wait for the next chapter!

nicely done, just when you think it's over the real hit comes. Hope you update soon!

*teehee* I've always been curious about a situation like this. Daniel should have listened to the voice of experience. LoL. I know what he's going through!

Great start! I can't what to see what happens and please don't keep us waiting to long!

This is really good, just as I thought it was all over, you finish with a cliffhanger! Please update soon.