| Reviews for White Flame |
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Confused Pumpkin 7/28/11 . chapter 1It's short and perfect and descriptive. Really, I don't know how it is when it's only a few lines long, but I can imagine the entire scene with your fic alone. I never really thought of the flames and the consuming love between Maedhros and Fingon, but it's a great idea. |
EddieIrvine 3/5/11 . chapter 1wow! I never thought of that point but it feels a bit sad,though, if you go on to think about the implication... as if that the love for Maedhros finally consumed Fingon's life... |
Eriala 3/18/08 . chapter 1i can't believe i never reviewed this. i've loved it for *years*. it is without a doubt the best drabble i have ever read. i was sure i had already left a review, but as it appears that i haven't, i will do so now. it's amazing what you can do in such a short piece. it's such a simple parallel you've drawn, but brilliant. it's a fascinating idea, truly. your description of fingon was perfect. you really have a way with words. |
Otto's Goat 3/30/05 . chapter 1I love that Fingon is a son of "Earth, of stone and mountain, whose roots go deep"- and that is a subtle difference between the two of them- the fire and the stone; the strength of each, the folly. |
elvenwanderer 6/6/04 . chapter 1quite reflective! sometimes fewer words can say volumes more than, well, volumes could. nicely done. |
SWE 5/27/04 . chapter 1 Lovely. You don't need many words to get the message across here, and it's the first time I've seen this interpretation. *applause* |
Quinga 5/26/04 . chapter 1Bravo! |
Nol 5/24/04 . chapter 1Oh, that's an interesting thought, and well-put. Good work. |
Squirrel on the Edge 5/24/04 . chapter 1Short, yet so effective. Very powerful ending, especially. |