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Loki /does/ love someone! He loves Fenris! XD

-_- sigh...so few Ragnarok manhwa fanfics out there, not the mention the anticipation of the next volume to come out is killing me...

It's interesting how you incorporated the traditional norse myths into Fenris's and Balder/Chaos's past (God knows the manhwa barely deals with the actual myths). Kudos on your reasearch.

Try using actual indentions and junk when the people are talking. o_O hard to figure out who's talking.

I'd have to say, Iris was a tad bit too rambunctious (dialogue-wise). This fanfic was kinda choppy, kinda short, but pretty good.

wow! Another Ragnarok Manwha ficcy! *dance dance*

This is so sad though. Unrequited love is always sad. Poor Fenris... ;__;

You just have to work on the paragraphs, though. Start a new line when somebody starts to say something. Sometimes I get dizzy reading them because I sometimes got confused as to who was talking...

no, you must add more, you must, you must!

Hay!Long time, no see!!(Though it was just yesterday, that last day of middle school...;_;)alright, enough strong emotions...
I realy love your story..though its kinda short...WRITE MORE!I'll read every and last one of them!
I like the part when Balder was knocked off and couldn't remember his name!^_^ And, of course, Chaos is one of the guys on my "Hot Guy" list!He's truly HOT!!Anyway, I want you to write more stories, and, I and Ksenia would prefer more like R or even better--NC-17!!But its your choice, I think every story would be good if it would be written by you!
Ja ne! See ya in High school
in August..;_; Kitty

P.S.- call me 24/7, especially if u got some news about Otaku and J suff~ =^_^=...

*pounces* ^-^ I really like your story. It's quite good. But could you *whining tone* pleasee make the chapters a little longer next time?

Thank you. So much. Finally, a Ragnarok fic about Fenris (my favorite gal). This fic is well-written and I applaud you. I hope you continue and although I like Chaos...well, I really like Loki. Is a Fenris and Loki pairing even possible? But besides that, can't wait to see the next chapter! ^_^