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| Dawnie-7 2005-02-07 ch 5, | abuseAw! I'm a crazy little person! So accurate actually :) Thanks very much. But oh my, he branded her! Not very nice :( |
| Josette Choiseul 2004-07-08 ch 4, | abusei like it, but you NEED some space when there are POV changes. cuz...dang. that was a bit confusing. everything else was really interesting, tho! :D |
| Dawnie-7 2004-05-24 ch 4, | abuseAw.poor Mort.She was torturing him!But atleast they're on a bit of a truce now. |
| Dawnie-7 2004-05-24 ch 2, | abuseHa,I'm loving the start of this.Nice set up and everything. |