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| OrangePunk 2006-05-15 ch 3,  | abusei hope you update soon, i really like fics that deal with the cali gang. if you do update, in just wondering if real jess is going to show up or if shes going to by to see him or something, please update. |
| music4mysoul 2005-03-13 ch 3, | abusePlease update this ! |
| ago spero 2004-12-01 ch 3, | abuseI read this story awhile back and am disappointsed that you never continued it. It's a really good story and a great idea! Happy writing! |
| bexlewis 2004-06-05 ch 3, anon. | abusegreat story, different to anything i'v ever read before so please continue soon! *bex* |
| Christie 2004-06-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseElizabeth...*voice wavers* Is this a narc? You're litnarc, aren't you? And that...Dean part...sounded all...Narc-ey... :( But, other than that... The dedication : Aw :) I liked you saying how Jess grew up and Rory grew down, and her going to California to try to grow up. The ending of Chapter 2 was great, about how she felt loved. You're writing, hostile Lorelai and Stupid Rory extremely well. Pregnant over winter break...Why can I see Rory saying something stupid and harsh like that to her mother? I like this, Reforming Rory centric-ish story. It makes me want to dance. Or to jump up and down and scream HALLELUJAH. (that slipped, I swear!) I can't wait to read more. |
| KaraBella 2004-05-27 ch 3, | abuseThis is a great fic. I love it! Can't wait for more! |
| smile1 2004-05-27 ch 3, | abuseHey! Still interesting and fairly well written. Bye, smile :-) |
| gilmorelvr 2004-05-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseits all good with me as long as you update son! |
| punkcatwitissues 2004-05-26 ch 3, | abuse*sings* I'm so excited that you updated! (love the chapter name, by the way!) ... whops just forgot what I was doing and lost this window... anyway, I love Lily dragging Rory all over and the idea of Jimmy and Sasha letting Rory stay with them. I'm DYING to know whats going to happen next. And, of course, I want to see more phantom Jess. :) |
| smile1 2004-05-25 ch 2, | abuseHey! Excellent and entertaining chapter. Bye, smile :-) |
| gilmroelvr 2004-05-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseloved it!! update soon! |
| Poodernite 2004-05-24 ch 2, | abuseReally cute story. I'm excited to see what happens when Rory and Jess speak. I think it is an interesting idea that Rory venture out to California after sleeping with Dean. I like it a lot so keep it up! |
| punkcatwitissues 2004-05-24 ch 2, | abuseJuicy pig sticks?! *pales* Suddenly my one of my favorite foods has taken on a giant "ew" in my brain. lol. It'll pass by tomorrow. This is such a great story. I love the idea of Rory going to California to try and figure out what happened to Jess, why he changed all of a sudden. It's the question everyone has been asking themselves since "Nag Hammadi". What happened? What things are going on with Jess that we dont' know about? I'm really looking forward to seeing how you're going to address that, as well as make us hate Rory just a little less. :) |
| Christie 2004-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWoah...That was... So great. Jess...kind of, haunting her...or whatever...That is great. You..wow...That was extremely well written and...wow.. *jaw drops* |
| Puzzle1481 2004-05-24 ch 1, | abuseHey, great first chapter. It seems very original so far, and I like the idea of a phantom Jess flagging her steps. I hope you post again soon! |