 Lumrosa-chan 2008-11-23 . chapter 1More! More! More! :P I love the beginning! |
 hopi2008 2004-11-10 . chapter 1 hey kaitlin,
This story is great! Kepp writting |
 Dark Ray 2004-06-01 . chapter 1You forgot to put a disclaimer at the beginning of the story. Please get over the stupid flame! I've gotten a couple of flames before and it doesn’t faze me from writing. Some people are just envious! |
 Dark Magician Girl Hikaru 2004-05-24 . chapter 1Ooh, a provoking fic. I like it. Especially since it's abt. Ryou. I must find out what happens next. Please Ud soon. Ja ne. |
 L. C. Webbs 2004-05-24 . chapter 1hm...will there be abuse scenes? i hope so really powerful beginning it grabs your attention. |
 SmoeB1 2004-05-24 . chapter 1That was interesting.I like it so far.Please, next chapter soon. |