| Reviews for Mute |
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imatwilightfan 6/29/09 . chapter 1aw..its nice..it was so agonizing to watch hinata get beaten up that way but she put up a fight despite what most people believed..even kiba, her teammate, thought her incapable of standing up to neji..she proved them wrong by fighting til she can't anymore..though she didn't actually win the fight she won the respect of probably everyone who was able to watch her display of strength.._..this episode was also a favorite of mine..other favorites of mine were the bikochou(?) mission, the other mission where they were protecting the girl and she fought the magnet guy and when naruto returned..but my most favorite of all right now is the chapter in the manga where she confessed her feelings in front of naruto..naruto has yet to respond to it but hopefully they'd be happily together.. NARUHINA! |
AnonymousNavi 8/7/07 . chapter 1Aww... that is so sweet. I love the NaruHina part. Oh I wish she had said that when she was fighting Neji. 'I can’t allow myself to look pathetic in front of the boy I love…' |
Story Weaver1 12/28/05 . chapter 1beautiful. Was it Kiba that was second to last? I liked his part best |
Small Tuesday 10/21/05 . chapter 1Mm. Touching, it is. Unique also. All three couples are pretty silent themselves, besides NaruHina. NejiHina is pretty quiet, and people don't acknowledge them often. ShinoHina is absolutely mute compared to all the other couples that involve Hinata. KibaHina, NaruHina, even SasuHina. All in all, this fiction once again proves the fact that you must be the greatest (and most popular) author in the entire Naruto section of . Keep up the great work, syaoran no hime. It's much appreciated. |
thunder sister 10/2/05 . chapter 1I love the way you characterized the, um... characters. They all seem to fit, not OOC in any way. I like it. I think that characterizing, writing the thoughts os characters during times like these, is your forte. You should work on it. :) |
GimmeMoreMANGA 6/23/05 . chapter 1aw. how sweet. you are such a good writer. everyone loves your stories. you got a lot of em too. great job, dude! |
noname 5/22/05 . chapter 1 ... I'm melting... And it feels nice. |
NuttyScribbler 8/7/04 . chapter 1SUGOI! your writing is terrific! XD. Couldn't stand the wait for TFTP, so i had to read all your other |
R.K.R 7/31/04 . chapter 1 Wonderful... absolutly wonderful._ |
Seductive Venus 7/16/04 . chapter 1after i read this, i was like, 'wow'. you have captured them to the very essence, ate syao. its so good! |
Ami-chan 6/11/04 . chapter 1 uwah! Syao-neechan wa sugoi! as in! hay...NaruHina isshoni zutto! thanks nga pla dun sa wallpaper! ang cute! wawa nman c Hinata, lamog sya sa laban ni Neji...yan n nga cguro ung iniisip nla nun. ang galing mo tlga syao-neechan! |
Kalivax 6/10/04 . chapter 1That was really, really good, for once it distracted me from shonen-ai, you should really write a accompany piece to it. |
Takari-san 5/28/04 . chapter 1 Sorry po ;; di ko gusto si Hinata :) pero, maganda pa rin naman yung fic |
Kuwabaras pupil-I.P.Freely 5/26/04 . chapter 1wow this was a sweet deep fic awsome job |
karen ocampo 5/26/04 . chapter 1 your good... :) |