| Reviews for Briar's journey |
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Booker10 8/2/10 . chapter 25awsome:)! please dont wait so long for the next chpter:) |
Rosebud in Amber 7/29/10 . chapter 24please update! this is an absolutely fabulous story and id love to know how it ends :D maybe you could have their teachers come to save them (Niko etc) you should really continue (even though you haven't for ages) cos this is one of the best i have seen D |
Blowon 6/7/10 . chapter 24 This is such a suspenseful ending to what you have so far. PLEASE update. I noticed you havn't updated for a year and I hpe you do. \I relly like your wroting so far but I wish you wrote more. |
blowon 6/7/10 . chapter 2 I really like this story so far. I've only read the first 2 chapters and can't wait to give you a well deserved complement and review. I really like it. I'll review later when I've read more. i only have one suggestion for you right now. try to make Brair talk more comprehensibly, in real english. i find it hard to read his words when he talks in slang. other than that i think it's great |
Booker10 4/25/10 . chapter 24this is so awsome! please tell me ur going to update it!:) |
Unconquered Fayth 12/16/09 . chapter 24The circle seems to have gotten a little over confident in thier powers. Please continue and keep up the good work! Thanks for the great story! |
iloverangers92 12/5/09 . chapter 24this is the best story i have eva read! i llve it and you got all the characters and their mannerisms down pat :) please update soon or i might cry, i want to know what happens! pleze? |
muddlingwaves 10/24/09 . chapter 24I'm really glad you updated! xD Chapter 23 was rather shocking, i did not expect that they would not be able to escape! Looking forward to future chapters! What is happening to Tris, Sandry and Daja? |
codie-shortie 10/18/09 . chapter 7holy crap nice ending with the father or who ever that was lol |
codie-shortie 10/17/09 . chapter 5i like how your makeing briar like an older brother ;)) good job so far |
codie-shortie 10/17/09 . chapter 4nice cliff hanger ;)) |
codie-shortie 10/17/09 . chapter 2your doing a pretty good jod so far i like it ;)) |
b.a.d 4evr 5/16/09 . chapter 23 what hapens next dont mind my spelling not that good at it b.a.d. means briar and daja |
dajaxbriar fan 5/3/09 . chapter 23 plzplzplzplzplzplz tel me dis eez goi briarxdaja din. vat hapens nex. ven r u goin 2 finish ze stry. |
Trisana Sarrasri 3/23/09 . chapter 23can you please please update soon i really want to know what happens. by the way is this going to turn into a BriarTris-hint hint nudge nudge-keep writing Taa-doo your great |