 Sarra Salmalin 2009-10-12 . chapter 1I loved spirits cry! Plz write more salmalĂn stories! |
 dark-spiritwolf 2009-08-20 . chapter 18Thousands...you leave us for four years with a cliff-hanger like THOUSANDS! Seriously cruel. This is very well-written, so much so that I feel like I'm reading a book-book. Please continue this story. |
 siamesefish 2009-08-11 . chapter 18Unfinished...tragedy! :( Please finish one day it is sublime |
 xXthenextbookwormXx 2009-07-07 . chapter 18My comment: Good Lord! I wonder wih Jardan would attack if he was bitten. Daine, maybe? Or the princess? (Ya know, I can't spell her name, even now!) Was he bitten? A lot earlier you spelled Mynoss wrong. It was at the end of a chapter, you may want to look for that. I liked the comment about being naked in men's bedchambers. 'I'm sure Neal would be happy to hear that.' Or something to that effect. I laughed! I think Daine and Jardan could be good friends if he warmed up to anybody at all. Of course, Numair would be as jealous as all get out, but we knew that. I approve of fluff! *Looks regal and commanding* You may continue woth the fluffiness! (Said in an odd, pompous voice) |
 Taylor 2009-06-29 . chapter 18 Are you planning on continuing this story? i hope you do. |
 NumairROX 2009-02-18 . chapter 1This story it amazing! I feel like i was actually in the book. I was captivated by the whole thing! I Stayed up till four in the morning until my dad forced me to go to bed. As soon as i heard him shut his bedroom door, i found myself reading again. Please continue writing stories on Numair and Daine, Keep me posted!! |
 Marlicat 2009-01-18 . chapter 18My heart is beating so friggin' FAST... You really must update. I'm desperate to know what happens! |
 Amee Lynn 2008-12-17 . chapter 18this is really fantastic! i'm a huge D/N fan, and this is some of the best stuff I've read. please update soon! i can't wait to find out what happens next! |
 Wei Ai Shen 2008-12-14 . chapter 18great story! please update soon. |
 rikash the mage 2008-06-20 . chapter 18 please oh please oh please write another chapter i'm haning on every word please pretty please with a dead blaze wing on top you have to write another chapter please common please ? |
 davinci333 2008-05-18 . chapter 18this story is very well-written, and almost feels like it really happened within the Daine series. I see that you haven't updated it in years, but I do wish that you would finish it! You have written the characters in such a way that I have to know that they're all okay...lol |
 StillDreamingOfLove 2008-03-20 . chapter 18update. It's a good story, and it's a shame you've left it. please, update. You're a good writer, so finish what you started. |
 x.Who.Dares.Wins.x 2008-01-06 . chapter 18hey
i love your story!
umm...
there was something i thought of saying
but i forgot
oh well
is this the end? |
 Streamstep 2007-12-18 . chapter 18This piece of writing really captivated my attention. I think that the cliff hanger you did was brilliant! I can't wait to here more! |
 Gabzalabza 2007-10-04 . chapter 18Hey!! Impressed! I'm fairly knew to FanFic but i've had time to read a lot of stories, my friend, and this one is definately in my top 5 Favs. I hope you'll write the rest soon. I hate to leave things hanging. And WHERE is Kitten!!?? (if u've mentioned that already and i simply 4got, apologies). I bet SHE'D know a few tricks by know as to dealing with these things. She's refreshing 2 read anyways. just a thought.
Well done! |