This was very, very funny! A real blast to read.

Not bad, for what looks like a first effort. The premise was interesting, if not original. I do suggest you take on the services of a beta reader. There are a number of typos and mis spelled words and grammatical errors that are distracting to say the least, and actually something that ff net discourages... typos and misspellings, and whatnot But as I said, not bad for a first effort.

Interesting crossover of sorts -- and if ever two people needed to "walk a mile in another's shoes", it's these two! It works quite well within the context of GAMM, I think, especially considering the gulf that seperates the interested parties -- talk about a transgenerational change! :-) Nice work -- thanks for sharing!

Chantal

I really liked the premise of this story. You did a nice job of keeping them in character and overall it was an enjoyable read. Hope you'll be posting more stories in the future!

Thanks for this beautiful story. I had good laugh when I imagined the Captain in high heels and stockings and by the thought Carolyn scaring Claymore. Great.
Anne

Thanks for this wonderful story! I thought you handled the changes excellently well -- kept them in character ... and I had a good laugh at the thought of the Captain in high heels and stockings, and Carolyn scaring Claymore! Thanks again!!
Susan