 Silver Fuel 2008-01-28 . chapter 5 Okay, the characters were somewhat OOC but the story still managed to put a smile on my face.:) |
 Bunny Wigglesworth 2004-12-08 . chapter 1okay so you made me cry - abit... that was fun... i'm keeping track of the number of ruhana fics i've read and so far i've read 3... this is the third one actually... i like that |
 annedrew 2004-06-27 . chapter 5 wow... that is so sweet!
you know it's a fad right now. kaede leaving baby hana in Japan for his dreams in America, then coming back to claim Hana back? then here goes Sendoh in between them.
Titles with this concept: ex. another chance |
 frozenfemale 2004-06-26 . chapter 5Hey...
I haven't been on fanfiction for quite some time so i don't really know what has been going on...
the story wasn't too bad... only with a few minor thingys...
for one... try typing the song in italics or bold or something so that it differs from the rest of the fiction. however, u must save it in webpage form for it to turn out that way on fanfiction.
second... well, the songs were too long. as in there was no pause between the song for the story parts and that sorta turns the reader off. i dunno... i mean i skipped part of the songs... don't get me wrong, i'm a songfic maniac, but... it's a little too long, though i marvel at your ability to find so many songs.
third... isn't one-shot a one shot story... as in not a long story with many chapters?
neways... sorry if that was harsh... :) it seriously wasn't too bad actually... |
 mercurialmaiden 2004-06-23 . chapter 5Thatwas so nice. I'm totally speechless! Ek! |
 Nian 2004-06-14 . chapter 2OH MY GOD! THIS WAS GREAT I'M SO GLAD YOU DECIDED TO CONTINUE THIS FIC. WONDERFUL CHAPTER INDDED!!, GAMBATE! |
 xUmEnGzHe 2004-06-12 . chapter 2such a beautiful story... the songs fit in really well... but, dunno why i keep feeling that there is something missing... can't tink of wat is it... all i can say is that rukawa's not going to have a good time... haha... |
 hee-chan2 2004-05-27 . chapter 1Yes yes continue please
I love it |