"We love Shadow!" was all that was written on the tablet...

:) Must continue reading...(checks clock) 0.0 Later!

the story is pretty good. good use of chos emeralds. clever idea tieing in sonic heroes and the new shadow the hedgehog game. looking forward to the next chapter!

Sorry for being late at reviewing. Moving does that. I'm begining to wonder who the hell that voice is. At first, I thought it was a second persona of Shadow that had been buried in his subconcious, but now... Whatever it is, it certainly doesn't want Shadow to know the truth about Maria.

*reads the chapter* come again? *read it one more time* I think a miss something, what's wrong with this picture?... hum... Intresting.

You're welcome for the review.

Here's another: this chapter is marvelously excellent, and the big scary voice (I can only assume its the Biolizard) is being very evil with lying to poor Shadow...but its all good!

I eagerly await your next chapter installment.

Um, are we not supposed to trust the voice? I'm slightly confused...
And where'd that other Emerald come from? As I recall, the Doc had one, Shadow stole one, Rouge gave them one, and they took the other three from Prison Island. Which Emerald was already there?

Very, very, VERY nice!

I started reading this last night at about ten and actually stayed up long enough to go through fifteen of the chapters! I must say, anything that can keep me glued to the monitor long enough to burn out my retina is really fine!

On the actual story, the whole plot line seems to flow nicely. I liked the begining (ah, the old sign post tie in XP), and when you moved into the Sonic Heroes adaptation, I liked how you were able to write it and make all the characters meet up right before the climax (I'm asuming it was the climax anyway). Very well written, and the discription for Fang was 'jawesome.
Then when you moved into this little Sonic Adventure 2 piece, it was a little hard to grasp were exactly Shadow began at time wise. But after figuring out that little piece, I must say, things look like they'll shape out to be excellent!

And by the way, any one who uses Fang the Sniper is my hero :D.

~Daikonran Blackice

Great story I like it very much. Keep up the good story.

Whoa...time loop! Freaky!

So, this means that Shadow will see the past happening...which may or may not remain the same without one of the Emeralds avalible...and then get caught and used to make an army of clone-robots? I saw that at the end of the 'dark' sonic heros thing, omega says 'you know about cloning, the original has to be here somewhere' (sorry if I just spoiled it for you) and oh, I'm just rambling stupidly now, aren't I?

I'll wait and see what happens then.

Can I just say - YAY TRIPLE GAME MIXOVER!

Okay, and with that out of my system, I'm off to read the other chapters!

I GO

I like this... Update soon. Untill then, I'll be waiting.

Excuse me for a moment.

*KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH* *squish* *KABLOOSH*

THAT, was the sound of my head spontaneously exploding and reforming after the realization that you updated.

Also, I JUST MADE MAH FIRST STORY! WOOT
Sorry, but I'm giddy, and I think it turned out pretty well.

Yes, I realize the last *KABLOOSH* was not followed by a *squish* which would confirm the regenerating of my head, which means I'm typing all of this with a bloody stump of flesh on my neck.

And I also realize that I will suddenly fall an an inapropriate moment, meaning that my aforementioned 'bloody stump' will land on the keyboard and cause me to unintentionally type random gibberish until I manage to hit 'enter'.

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Should be about hjyunb bnjlp;'

ooh, very nice. good plot and everything :thumbs up: heh, liked the bit about time travel screwing up the past/future/present