hi hi love teh story very cool

All right my little Krisian! Darcy is soo cool! And JD's hot, but i can say that. More, I command you!

Lily

Excellent story. I can't wait to see what the professor wants. Ooh, a little action would be nice. And maybe a romance...between...i dunno whatever...it would be nice anyways.

Not too bad so far...interesting...keep up the good work!

oh very interesting. Hey and seeing as there's an invisible guy, i hope you're gonna give him something mishievous to do, like our pal Skinner.
I'm so glad you're having Kurt as a main character, he's the best! I must see some bamfing BAMFING!
ok this is getting me too excitied so i'll leave before i run in to something. *bangs in to door frame on way out*

Not that bad for a first attempt.
Anyway, thank you for not writing accents.
And something else: there's way too much "chaos" in the beginning of this fic. Unless it really serves a cause, try to avoid repeating words.