|Reviews for Tales of a Broken Heart|
| Leah 1/3/05 . chapter 41
I think you've missed posting chapter 41... all it is is a really long author's note... and then Lily says something about saying "no" to severus in the next chapter...
:) confused, and not wanting to miss out on anything!
great story, by the way. ;)
| LittleCrazy1 1/3/05 . chapter 44
ok so this JUST clued in to me: Do Alice and Frank get married? Cuz if they dont, he must meet another Alice, eh? good story so far, I love this fic!
| angel-girl-xxx 1/2/05 . chapter 2
This could be a really good story. The only thing is that all the characters seem Mary-Sueish, all the girls come across as being perfect. And some of their speech doesn't always sound realistic. "I see that we
will be working together as prefects, my congratulations" for an example - just doesn't really sound natural.
But I like your plot so far, although I haven't read very much!
| MagicalQuillz 12/27/04 . chapter 45
That was a good chappie...I was thinking that it was about time for 5th years to get career advice, you know. :3
Anyway, there are 12 OWLs, I'll try to think of classes: Astronomy, Acient Runes, Potions, Transfiguration, Divination, Charms, Herbology, History of Magic, Defense Against the Dark Arts, Care of Magical Creatures...I've run out. As usual, I'm wayy too late to be telling you this, but it might come in handy...and anyway, I just wanted to tell you what I think. Lily SHOULD get all 12 OWLs, because she worked harder than anyone else. And plus that, she reminds me of Hermione...if you get my drift...XDD
| MagicalQuillz 12/27/04 . chapter 44
Well, that was very interesting... Is it because James was liking Lily and then Rita went into Hogsmeade with James and he never spoke to him again? It was a little obvious, or at least it seemed like that, but I might be wrong. :) Sorry for the stupid reviewer/reader...you're working hard on these stories and if they don't appreciate that then they dhould get over it and get a life...or a hobby...or SOMETHING.. Bye, then. XD
| MagicalQuillz 12/26/04 . chapter 42
synonyms for serious: grave, somber, severe, staid, sober, unsmiling, humorless, stern, grim. I know this is obviously too late, since (most likely) your entire story is out. But if you happen to read this, then you have your synonyms(thank MS Word, lol) XD
| MagicalQuillz 12/26/04 . chapter 39
Interesting...it was Janette he was dating, duh, it says right there. J/K:) I'm just reviewing for a ton of chappies at once since I don't feel like it after each one. You're doing great so far, but there's a lot of spelling errors, which I don't blame you really for since you mentioned it earlier anyways. Well, keep up the good work! :3
| AMELA 12/11/04 . chapter 48
THIS IS THE 250TH REVIEW WHICH MEANS I GET A WALK ON ROLE!
I JUST FREAKING WON THE FREAKING LOTTERY!
btw, nice, simple ending chapter.
i can't wait to read A Rise to Power!
keep it up!
| wheresthespacekey 11/20/04 . chapter 15
| wheresthespacekey 11/20/04 . chapter 11
| wheresthespacekey 11/20/04 . chapter 10
dude now shes pissin me off. haha i love how your stories make me feel real emotion. :D
| wheresthespacekey 11/20/04 . chapter 5
*cries* poor severus. WHOA DID I JUST SAY POOR SNAPE? haha
| wheresthespacekey 11/20/04 . chapter 2
awesome, one again, but sometimes you got 'she' and 'he' switched around.. LOL
| wheresthespacekey 11/20/04 . chapter 1
heyhey whoa im kinda late to review this story . lol a few things - ""I can console myself with the fact that she greeted us the same way-" Holy commented"" 'holy' should be holly, right? oh well, i bet im not the first to tell u that. lol
| Charm12 11/13/04 . chapter 48
i can't wait for teh sequel! i lost teh link for thsi and was looking through my old reviews and found it again! and i don't have a "real" Jamesie plushie but me and my friend made a snap eplushie! we're going to send it to J.K.R can't wait for the sequel!