 JxAlovergirl 2007-02-10 . chapter 5 Takuya is Aelita isn't she! That was Xana's first condition wasn't it! |
 zim 2004-10-13 . chapter 8 PUT SOME ** VIOLENCE IN THERE HAVE URICK KILL/CLOSE LINE TY WHAT EVER HIS NAME IS HAVE YUMI GET PISSTED AT SOMEONE HAVE AMI KISS JERIME OR SOMETHING |
 Hippie-Freak 2004-09-05 . chapter 8Well, at least you updated, and thank you for that, but you better update again soon. This is not enough to satisfy me. You need a longer chapter woman!Tell ya what, if you update two chapters to your story in the next week, I will update mine. I have spoken my peace. Goodbye |
 55520 love your story 2004-07-28 . chapter 7 keep on writing this story is really good u left me with a...um wathever thats called please up date soon please! |
 Kay 2004-07-27 . chapter 7 Keep going! Update soon please! Let me guess Ami(Aelita) Is Yumi's lost cousin! Am I right?! |
 Peter K./Salemok-e 2004-06-22 . chapter 7 *running, running, running* AH!*ran right over clifhanger* *decending voice* please continue behore i land! |
 Hippie-Freak 2004-06-21 . chapter 7How dare you lave me hangin at a cliff hanger like this!I CURSE YOU, CURSE YOU, CURSE YOU!and I'm not kidding too. Your luckly I gave you back your Fruits basket before I read this, or else I wouldn't have given it back until you updated(for all you people reading, were really good friends, so just ignore us)anyways, your doin really good on your story and continue or I'll hunt you down and kill you. BYE-BYE! |
 Zeke 2004-06-18 . chapter 7 Please continue this soon--tho' convuluted, I like it very much. |
 decaydance 2004-06-16 . chapter 7OMGT OMG OMG OMG please finish..i dont want her to go away...gr |
 mMarikom 2004-06-15 . chapter 7PLEASE DONT TAKE YUMI! |
 Mr.Evil 2004-06-09 . chapter 6this is going to get mushy huh? well i can tell there not out of the darkest part of the tunnel yet and i cant wait to see whats in store for them |
 Mr.Evil 2004-06-09 . chapter 5hes the evil mastermind i cant wait for whats in store for Aelita |
 Mr.Evil 2004-06-09 . chapter 4I cant wait to find out |
 Mr.Evil 2004-06-09 . chapter 3confusing |
 Mr.Evil 2004-06-09 . chapter 2I love it how Xana is so evil |