This was an excellent story! I think you really captured Creegan's sense of humor and Susan's reaction to it. Wonderfully done:)

Wonderful. Absolutely *wonderful*. The voices are spot-on - Branca balancing career objectives with professionalism with the fact that, hey, Creegan's hot. Love, love, *love*. Just thought I should pass a line around before I go spouting off to my friends how good this is. ;)

very nice. :-)

I think you really captured both of their voices here.

*Deadpanned* I think they're sleeping together.

:) Great story! I love it! I'm a Creegan/Branca shipper. What more can I say, other than you wrote this short fic perfectly. I hope you write others (and if you did, I'll check them out)

Spectacular job! This show blindsided me with its cynical humor. I love it and you've captured it beautifully. Thanks for staying true to form with the dynamic duo. I'm not sure many people could.

I read this story at some ungodly hour last night, and was a little too buzzed and much too tired to write you a proper review. When I re-read it this morning, it was even better than I remembered. You've captured so many things perfectly -- the imagery of the show, Creegan's quirks, Branca's reluctant amusement, and that genuine connection between the two of them. It's amazing.

I don't know if you're keeping this a one-shot, but even if it is, I hope you've got more TE fic planned, because this was one of the best fics I've read in eons.

Oh -- and I friended you on LJ, because you're damn funny there, too.

Hahaha that was hilarious! I give ya props! :D I love when Creegan says, "I'll take down the next asshole that says anything, how's that? Better yet, you take him down; I'll watch." That seems more like him I think. That was awesome. More stories from you?? I hope so. ^_^

I liked it. It's very cool; very fun. Shows the chemistry between the two.

I really like this story! You've captured the characters perfectly. Nicely done.

Thoroughly enjoyed this fic. I could just picture the whole thing! I love the interaction that you captured between them, and join the clamoring for another story from you!

Well she should be sleeping with him!

That was really well written! None of that overly-sappy crap that people like to put into fanfiction. You've really got these two characters down, and I hope you use this talen to write something new soon!

and she has a problem with that?!?! what, can i help it if Creegan is hot? a girl can dream!

this is GREAT, I'm so happy more people are riting Touching Evil fics... so good

Great story...you got Creegan down. I loved it. I hope you write more soon.

This was AWESOME! I mean it. You have both Creegan and Branca down cold--I could totally picture them in my head. And, just like with the show, it had that certain mixture of comedy and something deeper, more emotional--did that make any sense? Lol, probably not, but just ignore me. I really loved it and I hope you decide to write more Touching Evil fics in the future... I'd be the first in line to read 'em! ~Loke