o, bust! Please write more! Please, pretty please?? For Cade's and Dinah's sake,PLEASE!!
( calms down ) ( deep breath ) okay...please write more..thanks hehe

Oh, please dont be too ** him! he didnt mean it!! and i appreciate your using my suggestion. it makes me feel so loved! keepy uppy!
~ Angel718

This is one of the best storys ever written! The writter has a very good imagination. I think that person will go far, if she does continue writting.

its a really good idea... but it would be even better if u would work on the description. like instead of saying, clocktower, u could say, like, meanwhile, back at the clocktower, or something.

good story do far. please continue soon. i cant wait to find out what happens next.

This is a pretty good fic. Keep up the good work and update soon.

Oh,goody goody!More,please?

This is probably gonna sound like a stupid question but humor me: is the plural for metahuman, metahumen or metahumans?

Interesting start! You're doing a good job. Keep writing!

Cool.Keep writing^~