dabzzygirl 2008-09-18 . chapter 8I agree with Monkwriter. You must have done a ton of research! Great job! One of the funniest Monk stories I've read! |
Monkwriter 2008-08-12 . chapter 8Funny and cute! I'm not sure reading all those questions and answers was as fun as watching it though but wow, the research you must have had to do! Good job. Unless, you know, you're a genius. Are you?
very funny, thanks for a fun read. |
agtchill13 2006-04-30 . chapter 8Oh, give poor Disher a break. At least he tried. Too bad he didn't REALLY have a finger gun (Get Smart, tv show)
Boy, Sharona, that's a pretty nasty threat. Worked though. It's a good thing Adrian didn't know how to diffuse a bomb.
That's a great story. It should have been made into a show. Although I don't think all the watchers would sit through the whole question and answer dialouge. I liked it though, got to read a good story and learn some interesting facts at the same time. This is going on my favorites list. |
agtchill13 2006-04-30 . chapter 7I'm surprised anyone believed him after his little episodes.
He's climbing a ladder?! That's a big 'step' for him. Will he blow them all up?!
I don't see why a light would blink if it had a bomb behind it, though. |
agtchill13 2006-04-30 . chapter 6I love the way you've got Disher mixing up the game shows. It's hilarious. Hm. Sam is acting rather suspicious.
The 'bleep button part' is my favorite! And it's great that you didn't actually write what should have been bleeped out. It takes some creative writing to have a charicture be a dirty-mouthed jerk without making yourself a dirty-keybord writer at the same time. This show is beginning to look more like 'Jerry Springer' than Jepordy.
Poor Adrian. I almost hope he loses somehow so he doesn't have to come back and go through all this again.
P.S I would have reviewed the rest when I read it last time but it was in the middle of the night (I just had to finish it) But my brain was too tired to make an understandable comment. |
agtchill13 2006-04-25 . chapter 5Uh, it's 'Santo Poco' not San Topoco. It means Little Saint. There were no bull rings there either. Boy if the bomb don't get him someone else sure will.
It's in the light, isn't it? |
agtchill13 2006-04-25 . chapter 4Oh, Oh. I get it now. The 'Ramps-in-the-road' comment made it ding. All the guys in the jail are all the guys Monk has put away. Sorry it took me so long but I've only watched six episodes and I'm not good at remembering names.
This is hilarious. The 'bankrupt' joke was good too. |
agtchill13 2006-04-24 . chapter 3Fixing his tie? On National tv! Ha. I bet if the people on the set knew about the conspiricy they'd be in on it. |
agtchill13 2006-04-24 . chapter 2Loved the makeup scene!! 'Befouled' that's what got me. It's just a funny word.
I have a feeling by the way you discribe all these criminals that they are real people. Since I have an aversion to the news I really wouldn't know. |
agtchill13 2006-04-24 . chapter 1Wasn't there a Matlock episode where he was on Jepordy? Doesn't matter. This is great so far. Charictures are perfect.
Ew, Yuck! I hate Dale. He's so gross. Revenge always makes a good plot. Somebody better find that bomb!
Dale's already in jail. What are they gonna do to him if (I mean) when they catch him? |
Dragon of the lost world 2005-10-24 . chapter 8HA! this is ecxelent! monk's nervous break down! how many characters from the tv show did you put in there? wow! |
Hungarian Horntail 2005-09-29 . chapter 8This is the best Monk story I've read so far. Honestly I couldn't tell the difference between this and an actual episode transcript. |
ClayandSarah4ever 2004-07-23 . chapter 8Great story. I haven't seen all of the Monk episodes, so some of the characters that you used I wasn't familiar with but, you did catch the spirit and essence of the show. :) |
zzilly14 2004-07-19 . chapter 8Good ending! Typical Monk :) I liked the Trudy bit in there :) Write more Monk stories! |
Maeghan Jade 2004-07-18 . chapter 7Arg! You can't leave us hanging like this! Updates, man! We need updates! |