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| eva 2008-06-06 ch 17, anon. | abusezomfg i feel so bad for sanzo! it's as if kanzeon bosatsu really made the ritual to embarass him! :3 i hope that you will update...it really is a very wonderful story. it's hard to find one without slash...i hate slash fiction. |
| Jamica 2008-05-17 ch 17, | abuseIf I didn't need to be quiet because it's late in the evening, I would've laughed hard enough to let my neighbours hear it. XD Sanzo doing that... Unbelieveable... But definitely funny. I love this fanfiction, I had to cry twice, but laughing fits were there too. I wouldn't mind if you updated. ;) |
| hanabatake 2008-01-22 ch 17, | abuseA so god story. Want more! Please :’( |
| S J Smith 2007-06-17 ch 17, | abuseBWAHAHHAH. Virgin. Monk. Dance. Ritual. Oh, boy. After tearing my heart out in so many places, I come across this last chapter and it's hysterical. ...and then there's nothing MORE! That's just wrong! It needs to be completed! *whimpers* |
| S J Smith 2007-06-17 ch 4, | abuse*cries over chapter 4* *just cries* |
| S J Smith 2007-06-17 ch 3, | abuseAw, Sanzo all weepy over his monkey...so sad. Love the scene with taking Gojyo to the bathroom. It made me alternately snicker and wish that Gojyo had missed and the stream had gone everywhere...except Sanzo WOULD'VE shot him then. Enjoying this muchly. Sticking in favorites now. |
| Hado82 2007-03-12 ch 17, | abuseThe...HELL? Sanzo...dancing...virgin monk dance ritual... As incredibly funny as I find this, it's one of the best Saiyuki stories I've read so far. The writing is good, and once you start reading, you certainly can't stop. (CoughSanzodancingCough) |
| Tina 2006-11-09 ch 17, anon. | abuseUnabhaengig davon, dass diese Geschichte einfach nur grossartig ist und mich seit ueber einem Jahr begleitet, ist dies eigentlich kein Kommentar. Als Dilettant auf dem Gebiet des Internets fand ich einfach keine andere Variante, mit Ihnen Kontakt aufzunehmen. Gemeinsam mit einigen Fanautorinnen habe ich begonnen, Beitraege aus "Echoes from the West" zu Uebungszwecken ins Deutsche zu uebersetzen. Ihre Werke werde ich natuerlich nicht antasten, da eine deutsche Variante sicher bereits existiert. Falls Sie an diesem Projekt aber Interesse haetten, waere ich an gelegentlicher Kritik und Verbesserungsvorschlaegen interessiert. |
| CTHKSI 2006-09-30 ch 17, | abuseXD! That last scene...XDD! ... In anycase. I love how you wrote out their thoughts/contemplations at the beginning. It was very well written and very well thought out. |
| Athina Dark-Angel of Death 2006-07-24 ch 17, | abusePoor Sanzo, look what you made him do. Oh well, I got some giigles out of it. Did he actually need to do the dance though or was it just some kind of sick trick the Goddess played on him? I'm really happy that this finaaly got updated even if it did take a while for me to leave my review, sorry about that. I did really enjoy it and will be waiting for more. |
| wildgirlxyz3 2006-07-18 ch 17, | abuseXD Virgin Monk Dance Ritual! Where on earth did you come up with that! It's great! I fell off my chair and couldn't breathe for the next ten minutes! I'm not exaggerating either. Oh dear god. This story is one of the greatest things I have ever read. You've really captured the spirit of Saiyuki and the souls of the characters along with it. I wouldn't be surprised if you had a previous life in that world! This story would be proof of that! You are a great writer and I will wait until the youki kill me for this story to continue. Great, amazing, awesome, indescribable job. You have my congrats and awe at writing such a thing! Can't wait for an update! |
| Sadina Saphrite 2006-07-18 ch 17, | abuseYOU UPDATED! I LOVE YOU! Whoo! I've been waiting /months/ for this chapter! Thankyouthankyouthankyou! Now, update again soon! Brilliant. Virgin Monk Dance Ritual. I'd pay money to see that. |
| wildgirlxyz3 2006-07-18 ch 6, | abuseReally good! I can't wait to read the rest! |
| SayWah 2006-07-18 ch 17, | abusehurray u updated! ahahahahahaha! this really made my day ^_^ can't wait 4 your next update |
| muckraker 2006-07-17 ch 17, anon. | abuseAh, beautiful. I think everytime I think about Sanzo, the cry of "Awooga!" will also come to mind. That made me laugh until I almost cried. How I love you. And missed you! |