hmmm, the maiden, the mother and the...other one, wiccan isn't it?

quite good so far.

One comment though it seems a bit long fora chapter and it probably influenced the number of review it had since it had a short exposition time not as short as int the TMNT fandom but still short. IF you find the time it would be interesting to separate it in chapter so more people would read it.

Really interesting concept behind this one, and a well-constructed plot too. I feel like I should have "seen it coming" much earlier than I did, but I got so caught up in the characterization and the various narrative viewpoints that it snuck up on me.

Which is good.

My only real criticism is that it was somewhat confusing and difficult to tell where one scene ended and a new one began, with no clear divisions between them in the text. Although my own experiences lead me to suspect this was more likely a weird formatting glitch on the site's part, back when this was submitted, rather than an error or omission on your end.

An excellent read. Thank you! Other than a word or two that evidently did not get deleted (when you probably beta-read or edited this before posting), it was near impossible to find anything amiss. Your writing skills surpasses even the most notable published author. Brava.

After my twenty-three year old daughter recently admitted to me about her preference for Thundercat comics, I am reintroducing myself to this particular fandom. In fact, her boyfriend gifted her this past Christmas with several of the newly minted Comics.

My preference for FanFiction leans more towards the adolescent transformed terrapin shadow warriors, otherwise known as Ninja Turtles. Still, I have to admit a fondness for Thundercats, and even used my children as an exucse to watch episodes of the cartoon when it was on television during the early eighties. LOL It was a very intriguing series.

Nevertheless, I thoroughly enjoyed your characterizations and the crisp writing style of this story. It is a style that I am attempting to learn how to do, so, I thank you for the lesson.

Be blessed,

Rene'

How come the best stories almost always have the least number of reviews? This had everything - including a focus on one of my favorite overlooked Thundercats, Pumyra. More people should check out this story.

Nice good fic ;)

My favorite story! Lyrical prose and beautiful imagery! You bring out the best in all of these women!

My favorite story! Lyrical prose and beautiful imagery! You bring out the best in all of these women!

You are very, very good. :)

I'm reading every one of your fics I can find...

It's wonderful to find a Thundercats fic that

is not only well written, but treats the subject

matter in a (dare I say it) "mature" fashion...and

thank goodness there's a writer out there who doesn't think "mature" means PWP and random kinkyness (is that a word?). Nice job!

I have no idea what that was but I suppose the story was good

Ya' know, a lot of stories here are about two to five pages of simple language and simpler plot. I've loved the Thunder Cats since I was in the 1st grade, and this story was absolutely wonderful. The portrayal of each of the ‘Cats, and more peripherally of the villains was done with an attention to detail lacking in many fanfics lately. Wonderful. Superb. Thank you for telling a good story and telling it well.