aww damn this is good stuff, very un bvts which means this is great in my book. nice use of thought confusuion and just about everything.

Wow, this is brilliant work! Good job!

want. my. favorites. back. urk. i have read this story many many times, and it's always just as good. breathtaking. mmm.. wow.

GREAT! I personally liked "getawaygetawaygetaway..." It made me laugh.

That is one of the greatest fics ever! Pure genius

um...put spaces between your words. other than that, really good fic

I like it! You've captured the moment perfectly!Love it.

whoa. very amazing. haunting and beautiful at the same time

i liked it. kinda screwy in a way, and took a while to read soe of the long thingys, but stil, good.

Good stuff. William's transformation into the Spike we know and love is captured perfectly.

*folds ands together, quietly* ..wow.

Ooh! Wicked! Not at all what I'd have expected, and that's *good*. Excellent work with William.

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That was So GOOD!

I like!