E! Absolutely spiffy. Inner turmoil teh sexx. ((And I love the banter between keyblades. X3))

Wow. Fantastic detail, and I love how you are working with the characters!

haha! great from one of the greats! you tempus are good personally i'm not nearly as good but check mine out anyways! you know the name (duh!)

Hm...the story keeps getting better and better. _ Siev cannot get enough of it!

YOU. MUST. GET. THE. NEXT. CHAPTER. UP. WOMAN! XD Please?

W00t! You've got a very spiffy story going so far, Ellen! _ Must. Read. On! *clicks next button* ...Oh yeah. And the page works. XD

-Caz

that's a friggin' awesome story sissa! as usual, I have no idea who these characters are or what that Al Bhed language is all about lol BUT, that doesn't mean i can't say it was splendidly written, well thought-out, flowed very nicely in most parts, and kept me interested from start to finish. excellent work :)

Wow. That was amazing. Keep up the good work and be sure to keep me posted when you update. Can't wait to read more. _
Siev