You killed Jessie! I am crying right now. That was so sad! How did she die anyway?

awww that was sad...but good. Very sweet! well done

That was GREAT!

i liked a little

rocketmissionary- I didn't appreciate the fact that she...um...DIES! It's too sad and wasn't that interesting. Bye.

RocketAngel1: How could you? I can't handle fics where peeps die! It's too depressing! It reminds other people (including me) about how crappy their lives are and makes their depression even worse! Why do peeps find entertainment in death! buh bye *ggrrrrrrrrr*

I didn't like it that much, but i just don't like sad type fics, oh well ::sighs::

very touching.. I liked it. It's not one of my fave stories you've written, but still it was good..

*sniff* Darn... You've made me cry. Shame on you. :P Beautiful Just beautiful. And he died in the end, didn't he? He seemed to have drowned, from the bubbles reference... But anyhoo. This was beautifully written. Please write more. And don't worry about spelling/grammar. Those can be fixed. :o)

Hey! This was great! What is your first language, anyway? I think that having English as your second language actually *helped* you with this, because I've never seen ANYONE pull off writing in the present tense throughout a story so well. It really really worked for this. Man, I've been in Spanish for 4 years and if I tried to write a story in Spanish it would be nothing compared to how great this is! Very nice!

O_O They died? Both of them? Wow. Well, that was a very good fic, again, your English is superb. Very good. Keep it up, but not too many death fics! _

Wind, this was very good. But so sad. Poor James, not understanding what had happened. Or at least not letting himself understand. As far as writing more death fics, well that would be ok, but don't just do only death fics. I like your happy ones too. Nice job with this.

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This is great! Love these dark things. -_ Great job! Real sad, though. Poor Jess...poor James...:(