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god of all
2009-09-15 . chapter 4
Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.
Shinzochi
2009-09-07 . chapter 4
This story is MAJORLY AWESOME!, it's better than the original Ranma 1/2, it would be awesome if this story were turned into an anime, i look majorly forward to the next chapter. (^_^)
Tigger-69
2008-04-01 . chapter 4
An excellent adaptation and crossover of the Ranma story. It is a simple idea giving Ranma a specific girls body but with very interesting results. A nice suitable blend of mirth and mayhem caused by the normal brand of Ranma chaos but in the X-men school.

It is a pity that this seems to be a dead story but what is here is highly enjoyable. If you get a chance please continue.
Gangsta Spanksta
2006-07-29 . chapter 4
Well that was a fun read. The chapters could be longer though. That is mainly because it feels somewhat disapointing for the chapter to end so soon when what you write is so entertaining. Anyway. I do hope that you continue this story one day.
Innortal
2006-07-24 . chapter 4
Getting better, but you need to detail the past. Why did Ukyo appear earlier? What is happening to Shampoo? Where are the fathers and Akane currently? Is Ukyo also following?
Innortal
2006-07-24 . chapter 3
You seem to both be messing with the timeline (who is the second fiancee, since Ukyo and the Takeout girl didn't show up till after Shampoo), to the gender pronouns (Ranma seems to be referred to as both he and she while in female form, which makes it confusing to read), to character descriptions (Ranma seems to have ever changing color to her hair).

Aside from lacking in character development (why is Nabiki with him, what happened to Akane, and such), this is a good idea, and I hope it improves.
ranma girl 14
2006-02-09 . chapter 4
plz update, this is a great story

it would be funny if he git stuck in his cursed form (idea)
deitarion/SSokolow
2005-12-14 . chapter 4
Looking very interesting. It's also the first Ranma-Xmen crossover I've found outside of the Anime Addventure. (Google it if you don't know it. It's a fun read.)
kitsune2477
2005-07-17 . chapter 4
Update ASAP!
SeeraaMuunFan
2005-03-08 . chapter 4
hey! I really like your fanfiction...and btw, send mesa message sometime on some messenger...

aim: jupitaadestiny
or
yahoo: andoroido_nonburu_juuhachi (android 18 - dbz)
nunofyorbiz
2004-09-16 . chapter 4
Oh, I like this crossover alot.
rickW22
2004-08-01 . chapter 4
It's a good storie keep it up . When are you going to add more chapter's
Slade13
2004-07-17 . chapter 4
great start, please continue!
till next...
Alex Ultra
2004-06-21 . chapter 4
Pretty good. Although, I was wondering. Is Ororo the same as Storm? As in, the same person?

Anyway,

LATER
Sierra-Falls
2004-06-19 . chapter 4
Hmm, an interesting cross. Its just that a Wanda Ranma hasn't been done to my knowledge, and you write it pretty well. I'm also interested in seeing how you'll pull together Wanda's chaos power with the intrinsic chaos in Ranma's life. I mean, how are you going to technically put it, theories, and skills?
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