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Reviews for: The Immortal LaMoore Saga
Kurt Baros aka The Falcon
2007-02-27 . chapter 4
wow ranma cured but what about the others i dont care about genma but some of the others didnt have a choice in the matter
Kurt Baros aka The Falcon
2007-02-27 . chapter 3
wow...someone besides ranma who has uber strong powers
Bobboky
2005-08-25 . chapter 4
i vote for Yuri

or maybe Kasumi.

sorry, but i have a beef with Akane. to unreasonably violent
Drkjester
2005-05-19 . chapter 4
Hey found this after reading some of your other stuff. You have a good story here so don't let it die.
xsprinter
2005-01-10 . chapter 1
I didn't know how to contact you that much and figured that you have stories so I'll use this opportunity to tell you that "The Animezing Race" has moved to the sub-category of Anime Crossovers, in the MISC category at the fan fiction homepage. I hope you do continue reading my fic and if there is anything more that will happen eventually concerning the fic, you'll be one of people to know about it first.
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Regards,
X-Sprinter
Raisins
2004-11-23 . chapter 2
Not bad so far. Oh boy, it's grammar nazi time!

Watch out for the words "your" and "you're". Every time you want to use one of them, replace it in your mind with "you are". If that's what you mean, use "you're". If it makes no sense, use "your".

Eg:
“But, your right. Mind if I use your shower?”

The first "your" should be "you're". The second one is correct.

Also, don't use "&" instead of "and" in prose, it's very unprofessional.
Chaotic-Lord
2004-07-19 . chapter 3
ohohohhooh, great job. I love the fact that he's soo ** powerful, Hehe. Keep it up man.You're in my favorite stories list, man.
The Nameless Author
2004-07-19 . chapter 3
ok you will get more reviews if you allow anonymous reviews to happen.

secondly i would like to say i like this fic so far. just please don't do a ranma/akane matchup. frankly i don't think akane deserves him. maybe a ukyo/ranma one would be nice. anyhow ja ne.
Alex Ultra
2004-07-19 . chapter 3
One word of encouragement.

Cool!

LATER
Lanara Bolina
2004-05-29 . chapter 2
very good story. i hope you update it soon.
ColdCypher
2004-05-27 . chapter 2
Interesting... I do like it, though the main character seems too calm all the time... He only displays the emotion of love... he feels no worry nor anger...I suppose that's the problem with being all powerfull. You don't have to worry or get angry, you just get even... Like it, keep writing.
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