 Kurt Baros aka The Falcon 2007-02-27 . chapter 4wow ranma cured but what about the others i dont care about genma but some of the others didnt have a choice in the matter |
 Kurt Baros aka The Falcon 2007-02-27 . chapter 3wow...someone besides ranma who has uber strong powers |
 Bobboky 2005-08-25 . chapter 4i vote for Yuri
or maybe Kasumi.
sorry, but i have a beef with Akane. to unreasonably violent |
 Drkjester 2005-05-19 . chapter 4Hey found this after reading some of your other stuff. You have a good story here so don't let it die. |
 xsprinter 2005-01-10 . chapter 1I didn't know how to contact you that much and figured that you have stories so I'll use this opportunity to tell you that "The Animezing Race" has moved to the sub-category of Anime Crossovers, in the MISC category at the fan fiction homepage. I hope you do continue reading my fic and if there is anything more that will happen eventually concerning the fic, you'll be one of people to know about it first.
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Regards,
X-Sprinter |
 Raisins 2004-11-23 . chapter 2Not bad so far. Oh boy, it's grammar nazi time!
Watch out for the words "your" and "you're". Every time you want to use one of them, replace it in your mind with "you are". If that's what you mean, use "you're". If it makes no sense, use "your".
Eg:
“But, your right. Mind if I use your shower?”
The first "your" should be "you're". The second one is correct.
Also, don't use "&" instead of "and" in prose, it's very unprofessional. |
 Chaotic-Lord 2004-07-19 . chapter 3ohohohhooh, great job. I love the fact that he's soo ** powerful, Hehe. Keep it up man.You're in my favorite stories list, man. |
 The Nameless Author 2004-07-19 . chapter 3ok you will get more reviews if you allow anonymous reviews to happen.
secondly i would like to say i like this fic so far. just please don't do a ranma/akane matchup. frankly i don't think akane deserves him. maybe a ukyo/ranma one would be nice. anyhow ja ne. |
 Alex Ultra 2004-07-19 . chapter 3One word of encouragement.
Cool!
LATER |
 Lanara Bolina 2004-05-29 . chapter 2very good story. i hope you update it soon. |
 ColdCypher 2004-05-27 . chapter 2Interesting... I do like it, though the main character seems too calm all the time... He only displays the emotion of love... he feels no worry nor anger...I suppose that's the problem with being all powerfull. You don't have to worry or get angry, you just get even... Like it, keep writing. |