"She is cheerful and strong and cries only when he's inside her."

wait... what.

She's cheerful and strong and cries only when WHAT? I hope I'm somehow misinterpreting that. Ugh, it can't be, it's just too sick.

Simply.. beautiful.

-does not know what else to say-

Beautiful :)

I. loved. it. Your writing is beautiful. It was beeauutiful. good job!

It's great!

I had to read through twice to piece it together. Very mysterious. I'm left guessing.

Pretty

As you mentioned, both were completely creepy! But I really enjoyed reading both this and Sum - a wonder to see a well-thought out and viable Naraku-perspective. I especially liked the skips through time in this story. Thanks for the links!

HUH?

wow.

[shudder]

well that was, certainly interesting.

Wonderful. c: I just couldn't get enough of your works! You're so addictive! Sigh. Hehe. Must. Read. More.

Well, I have to say that I am more than a little confused, but maybe that's one of the reasons I love it so much? Either way, it was great, and I would deffinitely read more of your fics

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. All I can say.

this is a really good fic, and u must b like the deepest author in the world, because I got absolutely none of it, lol

This is truly beautiful and dark. :)