Really sweet and very well written, you got the character just right.

Wow. I have to add my praise to the other reviewers who have complemented your ability to write in Jack's voice. You really did a great job of exploring his point of view and the character's relationship with Samanthat. And the flow of the language is just gorgeous - so poetic. I hope that we will see alot more WaT fanfiction from you. :)

Oh awesome! I love how you structured this story and made it part of Jack's subconscious. You also brought up a lot of great points.

im liking this! just discovered the without a trace stuff and im loving it!

aw, it was so nice to come upon this at the end of my day... This is written beautifully. You've got a talent for sensing the inner thoughts of Jack Malone. Man, I could hear his voice!

Ooh, I liked this! Very insightful (I love Jack POV pieces). Especially this line: "(I'm sorry, I love you, I'm sorry I love you.)" Aw. Keep writing! :)

Oh...nice. Very, very nice. Every word flowed perfectly towards an incredible ending. A very impressive piece of work! The crowd calls out for more...