Absolutely amazing story, maybe you could do one with more of Alex in it? Maybe mix old and new together? It would be brilliant!

great story

I really liked this story. At times, I wish this really happened on the show ...

That's such a wonderful story. I loved it! I will start looking for more of your stories!

Cute!

Lovely bit of reverse psychology. Love the ones you hate and hate the ones you love and get them together. Cool!

Ah, clever! LOL I was wondering what was wrong with the old lady! Too bad we've never seen Grandma Sarah on the show, she'd probably think that Harm and Mac belong together too. Who doesn't?

Kenzie

I just love the whole conspiracy thing with grandma sarah! This was a good story to read!

Finish this story

You so had me fooled! I thought Grandma Sarah had gone off her rocker! That wsa awwsome!

It rocked & the writing wuz awesome. Perfect length, story, everything. WRITE MORE!

It was cute.

This was a great fic. the shippy end was nice, but the plot was even better. i loved the y grandma sarah! she was BAD!

graet job.

well this is my fave out of ALL of this series. I will get around to feedbacking the entire series one of these days, but this one is my fave so it gets done first! The whole Rachel getting shot scene is so frightening real that you can see it in your head. Its so freaky that in the blink of an eye, someone you love can be lost forever. Jayemonster you've captured Frank's concern so well its not funny! As I said, this has to be my fave in the series!

OO if only we'd known were this would endup! teehee OO the start of the best series in all Ratfic! I love the prelude... certainly hints for more to come! okay so I phrased that badly.. who cares. Jaye.. you ROCK!