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| HeavenStone 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseVery emotive. Harry has been through so much in his young life, a difficulty which you captured beautifully. Ginny seems to play a plethora of roles in Harry's story. I like how you've interpreted her here -- something more than a friend and less than a lover. A person who can understand what he's been through and is willing to accept that he might be confused and angry. Thank you for sharing this one-shot with us. I enjoyed it! |
| q.thews 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseNot even so sad as it appears. And there are some good reasons in it. Ciao! |
| Droxy 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseHarry has a case of PTSS, like any veteran. Beautifully written. |
| Rosmerta 2004-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnd in one brief story you've shown why Ginny is perfect for Harry and Hermione would be so wrong - much as she's a terrific friend to him. Brilliantly done! This is a completely believable outcome (and I love it that you kept it in the Severus-and-Maud universe; Harry's reaction to their romance was a great comic touch!). I hope we get to see more of this Harry. Sequel?? |
| ,00, 2004-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI know this story is complete, but please write more Maude/Snape stories. Little Snapes or Jr. Snapes at Hogwarts. Please. |
| Bluerain22 2004-06-02 ch 1, | abuseaww that was so beautiful. Neville's one of my favourite chacters and you did justice to him. Great guy. *cries* Very well written (Like the rest of your stories). Thanks for writing it! |
| Deeble 2004-05-31 ch 1, | abusePowerful -- you've caught exactly the pain and confusion of canon Harry, with just a touch of maturity gained in two extra years. And I can absolutely see Ginny growing into this young woman by the series' end. |
| Lauren Snape 2004-05-26 ch 1, | abuseExquisite as usual. Very pained. I could feel it. I've run out of things to say, good work. |
| HP22001 2004-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this story...maybe a sequel??...or maybe a continuation? |