That was an interesting encounter ... And still, you've gotta love Pinocchio's new attitude. _ If you write about Yugi going to their world, that would be interesting.

Considering I have no real grasp on subreverse fics, I think you did fine. _ I like your writing style anyway; it's a mix of many things. Poor Sakura, though. This was interesting.

Whoa, very cool! I need a muse!