I love remus/lily so much! I think you'd like my one shot remus/ lily... It's like the total oppasite. It was amazingly well written. yoiu did a wonderful job. I also like your fanart on deviant art. Great job!!

Oh poor lupin I feel so sorry for him! A lovely little one-off, just keep an eye on your grammar and spelling. Love the pen name as well.

That is very very good for a first chapter. Please write more. I would have never have pictured Remus liking Lily but it sounds good so far. You're a really good writer too, hope to read more soon.