|Reviews for The Perfect Date|
| walutahanga 4/27/06 . chapter 1
I just realized I haven't actually reviewed this one.
Okay, here goes. First off, you've absolutely nailed Eighteen's voice. The effort it takes for her to act in a human manner - very well done, and very funny. Pre-recorded responses, humour menu, the "vibrating body"... the first time I read this, I think it was the middle of the night. My housemates probably wanted to kill me.
But you haven't sacraficed the characters for the sake of humour. Every funny incident is totally in character, and exactly the sort of thing I can see them doing. Like Krillen's sexy dance, for example. And Yamcha's hallucination. And him predicting exactly what Krillen was doing. And kicking the car into the ocean. And...Okay. Too many bits that I love way too much.
I'll just finish by telling you to hurry up already with "Flight of the Wolf Hurricane"! I'm really curious to see what that's about. I presume it's another Yamcha think, but even if it isn't, I'll still read it. That title is just way too intrigueing to pass over, especially from an author like you.
So yeah. Great story, and I'm looking forward to your next one.
| hippiechic 11/13/04 . chapter 4
I have really enjoyed the relationship you have described between Krillin and 18. Great job there! They're just so darned cute!
Marron's right. Yamcha should have kicked Oolong instead of the car. Picking on Oolong is always an entertaining way to spend the evening. Hey, I would have been amused. _
Very cute story. I like the ending. It's very sweet. Now, if you'll excuse me, it's almost 4:30. Bedtime for Mar! You did a good job on this story. You should be proud! Oh! And you should write another story too. _ Until then, (and you'd best email me when you post) Peace and Out.
| hippiechic 11/13/04 . chapter 3
I love Krillin telling 18 to scroll through her humor! That is too hilarious! I think my roommate's going to kill me if I don't keep my laughter down though. Something about working all day and then be woken up at 4 am. Hehe. Funny stuff though. _
Lol! Oolong always did have a thing about underwear! I can't decide who's going to go on a killing spree though, Yamcha or Marron!
Oh no! Yamcha did NOT compare Marron to Bulma! I know he's not THAT stupid! Then again, Marron'll probably kill him for it, just like Bulma. Hmm. Maybe Yamcha's words have merit to them afterall. Then again, he'll probably never live long enough to know it.
Lol! Poor Yamcha! It's not his night, is it? Poor baby. Makes his wife angry (not getting any tonight it looks like), gets spied on and breaks a toe. *chuckle* Gotta love that silly clown. Peace and Out.
| hippiechic 11/13/04 . chapter 2
I like the way Eighteen conducts her human encounters. If she doesn't have a preprogrammed response, she makes up some bullshit. Wait a minute! Isn't that what we all do? *blink* Maybe that makes her more human than anyone ever gave her credit. Hm. Food for thought. _
Yamcha's smooth. I wouldn't mind be seduced my a man like him. What was wrong with Bulma anyway to give him up for an ass like Vegeta? *rolls eyes* Woman must be a glutton for punishment. *sighs dreamily, thinking about Yamcha*
I wonder who's hiding in the bushes. Personally, I would thoroughly enjoy "watching" Yamcha beat the heck outta someone. It would be most entertaining. _ Peace (or not, hehe) and Out.
| hippiechic 11/13/04 . chapter 1
Have I ever mentioned before how much I love 18? She's the greatest ever (my fave chick on DBZ)! You did an awesome job with her! Most people can't seem to get 18 right; Kinomi and you are two of the rare exceptions. Great job!
Hey! Their date was ruined! That was mean, E. Shame on you. _ As long as you have a good alternative, I'll forgive you. Alright?
Good start so far. I'm pretty much hooked. I have to know if Yamcha manages to make it up to Marron, and if Krillin will somehow manage to get in trouble with Eighteen. *chuckle* For some reason, Krillin in trouble has always amused me. _ Maybe it's just my sadistic streak that always kills characters off in my stories. *shrug* Oh wells. Peace and Out.
| Kinomi 6/23/04 . chapter 4
Glad you remembered to post the end...I was starting to wonder. LOL. Great job, girl! I hope you do another Yammar story soon...especially with little Hancha.
| xXYamchaXx 6/23/04 . chapter 4
Nice ending, the second ending was just way to funny
| snoro 6/23/04 . chapter 4
*sniff* for me?thank you!great ending to a wonderful fic, i certainly enjoyed reading it. ya i was getting kinda tired of waiting for you to update so i figured i'd remind you.i checked on it write something else!
| snoro 6/18/04 . chapter 2
| Kinomi 5/29/04 . chapter 3
I have only two words for you, chickie-dee...
That and, "Love it!"
| snoro 5/29/04 . chapter 3
_ unbeleivable...omg, this is one of the best fics i've read all year, you got me checking on it everyday, and i'm just lovin your speedy updates...oh and i'll try to keep this review pg 13...i love that "ready for another baby" line btw, keep up the good work, but especially the speedy updates..._*hint hint*
| snoro 5/28/04 . chapter 2
omg, if you don't hurry up and update this shit i'm gonna freakin die...
| Kinomi 5/27/04 . chapter 2
You have such a talent for giving me the giggles, e. As always I can't wait for more - and while you know what MY preference for the story is - I understand the limitations of the audience and posting on ffnet. If you do decide to "go there" you know that "part" of the story will always have a home on Maydec. Heck...I might even UPDATE for that! LOL.
Keep up the good work!
| krillen1 5/27/04 . chapter 1
Dude, sweet! I really like this fic and look forward to more! I can't wait to see where it's going! Just PLEASE and I mean PLEASE keep it pg-13, no nasty stuff ok. I'm only 15 and I really don't want to read any more sex fics! Thanks! Update soon! Later!
| Kinomi 5/26/04 . chapter 1
Happiness is a Yammar story...especially one that has my favorite little guy in it. As I told you before when you emailed this to me...
Can't wait for more. So hurry up! LOL