you ned to work on your grammar but otherwise i like the story.

aw nice ending, that was a really good story

Hey Mikaera! First thing I want to say is your story is awesome! I mean, it has everything I like in a good anime story. Romance, adventure, drama, suspense, not that much action in it, but the freaky kind! (smily face doing a 'wink wink' then laughing) And I love the Kai/Hilary couple stories, please write some more. Okay, now that I have that part out the way I want to say this last thing. Now please, do not take this in the wrong way and if I kinda disrespect you then I apologize in advance. But, you are SICK! I mean, that was just plain out nasty the way you made that man rape my poor baby and the rest of all them kids. But aside from those few nasty weird parts, I enjoyed the story a whole lot. Please write some more in the future your stories are great!

Perfect...

Aw so cute! I loved it! It was short, but sweet! So is this done? -coz i honestly dont want it to end- lol

It was such an awesome story! That I totally grew to love!

ha..(SNIFF)weeping...

that was so great it was astory which touched my heart

all the best in the future!1

Aw that was so sweet! THEY WON! Take that Voltaire! :P

*sniffle* It's finished...T.T I don't want it to end...-sequel?- lol What about a sequel of them years later? Like a oneshot!

That was so cute..I love all the couple's scenes! SO DAMN KAWAII! hehe ;) lol

T.T Wah it was so good! I loved this story so much! I'm sad that it had to end..but every good thing comes to an end ya? lol

Anyway, that was AWESOME! You're totally AWESOME! hehe, and I hope you write more!

GREAT JOB! I LOVED THIS STORY -AND THIS CHAPTER- .

Kitsune-chan *_*

PS: Were there enough compliments? lol

it update soon... please

Just... excellently written.

I have to admit, that chapter was just amazing.

On the last chapter, land a perfect ending.

It'll just add to the touch.

Awesome fic! .

Aw no I don't want it to end either! lol *sniffle*

] Sweet chapter! C'mon...PROSECUTE THE BASTARD ALREADY! lol DAMN YOU VOLTAIRE! You f**ker! lol :P hehe

I LOVED the KaiHil! It was so cute! And can you add - in the next chapter - a scene just for KaiHil maybe after the trial! Pwease! lol

Awesome job! LOVED THE CHAPTER SO MUCH! XD lol

UPDATE SON!

Kitsune-chan *_*

it update soon

HOLA! Awesome chapter!

Yep! Many things revealed indeed! :D That's so sad what happened to Tala, Bry and Tash! (Natasha, I'm givin everyone nicknames!)

SO sad and so mean!

o.O Interesting! I likey alot! :P lol

UPDATE ASAP! :D

Chau

Kitsune-chan *_*

Oh my god! I think its great write more and i will read it I swear!

Hi.

I used to review under M45t3r_C0ntr01...

Anyway, this is excellent-

I just don't know what to say. Speechless.

Follow along. Keep this up.

I don't get it.