I GOT THIS REVIEW THINGGY TO WORK...

hey i just wanted to say that i really liked your story. i cant wait for the next chapter. i know you told me to do this a long time ago, but i couldnt get it to work...so i forgot about it, until i was checking my favorites, and then i re-read this and then i submit anonomous review. arent i smart?...hmm...well, i got to go. there is some crap on the tv that my grandmother wants me to watch...and then i guess i am going to go outside, or something. my brother is supposed to come tonite, and my mom should be home any time...actually she should have been home 2 hours ago but she might have gotten busy. bye.

~alanna M.

I GOT THIS REVIEW THINGGY TO WORK...

hey i just wanted to say that i really liked your story. i cant wait for the next chapter. i know you told me to do this a long time ago, but i couldnt get it to work...so i forgot about it, until i was checking my favorites, and then i re-read this and then i submit anonomous review. arent i smart?...hmm...well, i got to go. there is some crap on the tv that my grandmother wants me to watch...and then i guess i am going to go outside, or something. my brother is supposed to come tonite, and my mom should be home any time...actually she should have been home 2 hours ago but she might have gotten busy. bye.

~alanna M.

YAY I GOT IT TO WORK...

im sorry for not telling you ow much i liked your story in my last review, i am sorry...

i really like your story ^.^ keep it up

i couldnt get this to work when you asked me many moons ago, so now i got it ^0^

;-; i really like your story ;-;

something silly:

i have been drinking less coffee...and im not as hyper as i usually am...wow...something is wrong with me...

dont get me wrong i still am a little psyco... but still...

i am free. i never understood what it was like for the longest time, but after i got out and started hanging with my friends who live around here, i am not on the computer as much anymore ^.^ arent you happy for me? ;.;

well, i must go. i have to clean my room. my brother is comming over today and my mom is comming back from work to hang with us. my brother is spending the night. i will have fun *monotone voice*

~alanna manns

YAY I GOT IT TO WORK...

im sorry for not telling you ow much i liked your story in my last review, i am sorry...

i really like your story ^.^ keep it up

i couldnt get this to work when you asked me many moons ago, so now i got it ^0^

;-; i really like your story ;-;

something silly:

i have been drinking less coffee...and im not as hyper as i usually am...wow...something is wrong with me...

dont get me wrong i still am a little psyco... but still...

i am free. i never understood what it was like for the longest time, but after i got out and started hanging with my friends who live around here, i am not on the computer as much anymore ^.^ arent you happy for me? ;.;

well, i must go. i have to clean my room. my brother is comming over today and my mom is comming back from work to hang with us. my brother is spending the night. i will have fun *monotone voice*

~alanna manns

YAY I GOT IT TO WORK...

im sorry for not telling you ow much i liked your story in my last review, i am sorry...

i really like your story ^.^ keep it up

i couldnt get this to work when you asked me many moons ago, so now i got it ^0^

;-; i really like your story ;-;

something silly:

i have been drinking less coffee...and im not as hyper as i usually am...wow...something is wrong with me...

dont get me wrong i still am a little psyco... but still...

i am free. i never understood what it was like for the longest time, but after i got out and started hanging with my friends who live around here, i am not on the computer as much anymore ^.^ arent you happy for me? ;.;

well, i must go. i have to clean my room. my brother is comming over today and my mom is comming back from work to hang with us. my brother is spending the night. i will have fun *monotone voice*

~alanna manns

Ah yes.. You have blessed us all with this cliff hanger, and now we all wait in tense suspense, trying to decide if we should all strangle you or bow before you, to get the next chapter out sooner, since you left us all with a really good cliff hanger. ::sighs:: Oh the horror..
::blinks tiredly:: I just woke up from a nap not too long ago.. ::grumbles:: Damn S2.. Well, at least my new favorite character is - ::does a pose:: Puss.. In boots. ::insane grin:: But yes, the story was good. Confusing, but good.
Puss In Boots: My friend.. Shall we go now? It seems that I am getting quite humgry..
Donkey: Hush now! Can't you see she's writing a nice letter to her sister!?
Puss in Boots: ::hisses at Donkey::
Donkey: ::glares::
::sighs:: Will you two stop?! ::glares at Donkey, then at Puss::
Puss in Boots: ::does the really cute kitten eyes at her::
::twitch:: Damnitt.. I hate it when you do that..
Puss: ::continues to give her the big kitten eyes, lets out a pathetic mew::
Donkey: Nah, man! Can you believe this?! Puss, don't get me wrong but she is never gonna fall for-
::suddenly picks up Puss:: Alright.. Fine.. You win. Let's go Donkey! ::walks away holding a smirking, purring Puss::
Donkey: ... ::sighs, looks at Chibi:: Well, yeah.. She likes the story and wishes for ya to contina with it.. ::grumbles, then runs after Puss and Crazy Lady:: Hey! Guys! Wait for me!

Hehe, story was good. Keep up the good work!

Hey there!

number9...number9...number9...number9...number9...

NUMBER9NUMBER9NUMBER9NUMBER9NUMBER9! BWUHAHHA.

sorry...i hate mr. casey for playing that now...and for YOU singing it

and...yes...this is a rather confuzzling chappy...

but i am sure that you will make it better because...after all...::gets all cocky:: you have mee to hellp you ^^!

jk, this is your owwn work of art and i have no right to do that to you. ^_^!! if you need help...talk to me at school or somthing ^0^!!

ok...let me get this right...

tierra's mom is going but not as a chaperone...
your mom is the chaperone...
i am in your group with you and tierra and the masked person of truth...
ok i got it ^_^!
i think...

*"What if i were to tell you that everything you were living now is a pie?" Said the boy looking up at a startled Akane.

"A pie? Yummy!"

"Err... Sorry, wrong script... I meant lie, not pie."

"GIMME BACK THE PIE!" Yelled Akane as she flatten the boy into the sidewalk.*

Sorry. I have something wrong with me. Nice prologue. Prologue. Prologue...

I'm so intrigued! Please, YOU HAVE to continue this story or I'll go nuts. So far I think the plot is great, I can´t wait to see the next chapter.

Hi!

For your first story this is quite good...i am interested to see where this is going.

Who is this little boy i wonder. Is he her brother? And of course you left us at a cliff hanger...the suspense...

well i hope you keep writing and will update soon.