 Merit Somnia 9/19/04 . chapter 1My breath caught as the last two paragraphs. That was a very thrilling ending. |
 RazZadig 6/28/04 . chapter 1How unfair to end there!
How hard we all try to keep our secrets-much like Trowa does. It leads to needless worry and added vulnerability. Trowa does appear to be the only one in the series who seriously feels guilty about his vice-not that it stops him. I thought it especially humorous that despite his anal precautions to avoid getting caught, he basically leads a trail to his door. Poor boy. |
 Link Worshiper 5/31/04 . chapter 1*eyes wide* Very interesting. This is definitely not your usual cup of tea, and I like it. I mean, it has 1x2x1, which automatically makes me obsessed, lol, but I really like what you did with Tro. I mean, yeah, the 343-ness is potentially there, but it's nice to not see it so sappy and all. The idea of Tro as a voyeur is very interesting, and I really don't blame him for being obsessed with watching Heero and Duo go at it. (Hell, I'd be hiding out there WITH him if I could, lol! Especially with lime like the one in this story ) And what I like most is the end. It really raises eyebrows, and it leaves you wondering what will happen to Tro. Always a good tactic. (Some people these days just have to have everything laid out for them, and it's kind of scary that they have no imagination. It's nice to throw a little speculation in here and there, ya know?)
And Heero and Duo love each other. And they admitted it. Aw! *tackles you* I love you! |
 Thimble.island 5/29/04 . chapter 1That was one of the best ends for the stories you've written so-far (well for me at least)
I never really thought much about Trowa having fetishes, but then i read this artical done by a fan who researched about Trowa and how he was possibly raped as a boy.So back to back with your story and that artical it really clicked in my brain.
wow you have the best way to make the GW-boys in ways that most people don't go (well,if they do they probaly make them like..cutters or somthing to that "oh-so-original" plot) so i'm just syaing these thing incase i forget! *smiles* |
 Natalie 5/29/04 . chapter 1 (chuckles) Trowa's got himself in some kind of pickle, doesn't he? Serves him right for peeping on his friends. Naughty Tro, but good stoy. I can't help but wonder what you're going to dream up for Heero's story. Post it soon. |
 Dragen Eyes 5/27/04 . chapter 1 o...now THIS one would ahve the best sequel! ahahaha |
 Mara202 5/27/04 . chapter 1me likes this series! YAY! voyeurism... that was kinda unexpected (not that i know what i _did_ expect, but well ), though the surprise-factor makes this series all the more interesting to read can't wait to read the last part! |
 Shaeric Draconis 5/27/04 . chapter 1 Another excellent chapter, heh, voyeurism...Trowa...I love it. It's always the quiet ones that you have to watch or as in this case Trowa watching Heero and Duo. The second to last paragraph made me smile, "I think we've been compromised." Great chapter, looking forward to the final one. |