Oh happy to see you posted this here. I read this story over at the Storm_n_Wolverine group (I think, I belong to so many groups now-a-days). Anyway just wanted to tell you this story was great. You really related to Storm well in this piece and all the emotions she must have been going through at that point. Absolutely wonderful, keep up the fantastic writing. :)

Very nicely done piece. I like your take on the relationship between Hank and Ororo, and you've let her personality come out throughout this. Good stuff.